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Beautiful Store[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to write the article about social enterprise.

This article`subject is 'Beautiful Store' which is non-profit company. To help your understand. This comapany is similar with Oxfamcopmany --HaeYoon (talk) 02:02, 6 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, HaeYoon (talk) 02:02, 6 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Have looked at article and found it very interesting with much more being able to be said about various aspects, but it seems it is undergoing major construction. There are many items mentioned in last paragraph first section, for example beautiful sharing schools which would be of real interest and need expanding. There is a lot of work to be done in getting translation across. Would recommend putting it forward for copyediting once the restructuring is done. Iztwoz (talk) 06:52, 8 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Note: The subject of this article looks both interesting and worthwhile. However, the article itself looks undeveloped and in need of quite a lot of basic work. Furthermore it has two major cleanup banners in place, which disqualify it from the peer review process. Peer review is intended for articles which have already been brought up to a good standard; it is not a "how-to-write-an-article" service. Most commonly articles are brought here for polishing in preparation for a Good Article or Featured Article nomination. This review should be closed, and the article brought back here when much more of the developmental process has been completed. Brianboulton (talk) 23:28, 24 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]