Wikipedia:Peer review/Date cultivation in Dar al-Manasir/archive1

Date cultivation in Dar al-Manasir[edit]

I saw this article, and it seemed to be very comprehensive about an interesting subject, well written, researched, and cited sources (which need to be /ref'ed in wikistyle). There are many interesting photos and I think it would be great if it could get some peer review for FA preparation. Thanks. Rhetth 01:14, 6 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 22:09, 8 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Personally, the article seems to have a few too many quotations in foreign script for what is basically an English-language article. Also, the cited sources could be changed into a standard format. Otherwise, the article looks good. John Carter 20:37, 17 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Well, due to it's anthropological nature, the translanguage information seems important to avoid any ethnocentric misunderstandings. Rhetth (talk) 18:26, 27 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]