This peer review discussion has been closed.
I'm considering submitting this article for FAC, so any feedback would be extremely helpful. Many thanks, SlimVirgin(talk) 18:11, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
Just noting here that I'm going to archive this and re-open it later. I've temporarily lost JSTOR access, and although I'd hoped to be able to get through a review without it, I'm finding already, in the course of text-source checks, that I can't. SlimVirgin(talk) 20:11, 26 July 2014 (UTC)