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The article is about a Filipino boy band that recently debuted in South Korea. I've listed this article for peer review as I believe that this article needs a fresh set of eyes to identify the weak points of the article and how the article could then be improved. I feel like there are a few areas in the article that I am uncertain of, but I cannot put my finger on it.
Right now, I am aiming for the article to eventually have a competent nomination for GA-status, but I do believe that's a long way ahead, knowing how this is a recent topic.
All feedback is appreciated, thanks, EdrianJustine (talk) 22:32, 24 July 2023 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
[edit]This looks like a good start, but since the band was formed in 2023 it might be difficult to get enough information for a GAN. If you are looking for additional sources, I recommend WP:LIBRARY for access to news sources, Google News, or your local library system. Z1720 (talk) 19:10, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
Comments from Freedom4U
[edit]- There's some MOS:SANDWICH concerns going on.
- It's Showtime, YouTube, and P-pop are linked more than once in the body. (See MOS:DUPLINK)
- Images need alt text.
labeled itself as a "world pop group" that "goes beyond the two genres"
- Don't really see the necessity of this quote