Wikipedia:Peer review/Kings of Ulster/archive1
I created this page and have updated it somewhat. Any comments would be welcome. Fergananim 01:16, 4 December 2005 (UTC)
- Need more immediate context: the first sentence should mention that this is Ireland, for example.
- Similarly, a broader category (e.g. one that mentions Ireland somehow) would be nice.
- The opening paragraph could flow a little smoother: some sentences seem a little fragmented. For example, Ptolomy's map (compiled about A.D. 150 from many earlier sources) shows them ... who is Ptolomy? Why does he have a map? There is a link to Ptolomy, but a little more (again) context on the page would be nice.
- It's not clear if the list of pre-historic kings is in any particular order. Can you put dates next to some?
- Wikipedia style calls for it to be "Pre-historic kings" (caps). Same for the other section.
- The infobox needs the area and population either filled in or blanked.
- An image of any of the kings, even an image with a king in it, would be a nice addition to the page.
- In the image caption, make "hill fort" two words and wikify it, as it is not a generally common phrase.
- Hope this helps. - Turnstep 20:20, 4 December 2005 (UTC)
- Might want to move this page to List of Kings of Ulster. Review these featured lists: List of Portuguese monarchs and List of Presidents of the United States for ideas on what could be done with this article. --maclean25 04:36, 17 December 2005 (UTC)