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Kisapmata

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I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like to take this article to GA status and would like to get feedback to help me.

Thanks, Kting97 (talk) 15:53, 30 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Z1720

These comments are given after a quick scan of the article:

"The screenplay was written by de Leon, Clodualdo del Mundo, Jr., and Raquel Villavicencio, the same team who previously collaborated on de Leon's 1980 film Kakabakaba Ka Ba? and de Leon's then on production hiatus Batch '81." This needs a citation.
"Quiling, Tito (2013)." and "David, Joel " are not used as citations in the article: cite them in a footnote (recommended) or remove them.
Box office section should have more specific information on how much money the film grossed, if possible.
"Critical response" section suffers from "X said Y". WP:RECEPTION has suggestions on how to avoid this.

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 03:50, 29 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the comments! Especially the critical response section, something I have been struggling with generally in Wiki editing, the link looks very helpful. Kting97 (talk) 14:56, 30 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]