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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm thinking of nominating it as a good article and would welcome any comments on how to improve it so it would pass GAN. Any general comments would be much appreciated too! If it helps, I've based the structure of the article on Wicklow Way which is currently a GA.

Thanks, IndentFirstParagraph (talk) 14:25, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi IndentFirstParagraph, I noticed that you have not edited since July. Are you still interested in receiving feedback in this PR? Z1720 (talk) 02:38, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

I took a quick skim through the article. I don't think there's anything that would cause it to instantly fail at GA, so I think it's ready to be nominated. Ensure that everything in the article is cited, especially the last sentence in each paragraph. Also, some of the paragraphs are quite long; I suggest reading WP:REDEX and looking for places where the same information can be expressed in fewer words. I hope this is helpful in improving this article. Z1720 (talk) 15:08, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@IndentFirstParagraph: Are you still working on this article? I noticed that you are not actively making edits. Z1720 (talk) 15:12, 16 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: I am closing this PR due to inactivity. IndentFirstParagraph or another editor may create a new PR when the above comments are resolved. Z1720 (talk) 18:35, 1 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]