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I've listed this article for peer review because since it was promoted to GA a year and a half ago, it has received significant expansion by many other well informed editors, and I believe it is close to becoming a candidate for FA.

Thanks, Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 06:39, 4 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Tim riley comments

This is a fine article, and I can well see why you have FAC in your sights. To do it justice I shall need to have several goes at it. First go herewith:

That's my first batch of comments. More to come. Tim riley (talk) 12:55, 5 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Round Two

1938. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 00:13, 1 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here endeth the second lesson. More anon. Tim riley (talk) 09:15, 6 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Third and last batch of comments
  • Independent schools
  • Leisure
  • Sport
  • Notable people
    • I think you may get this list through FAC without too much flak even from those allergic to lists within prose articles, but I suggest you remove the two people who are not notable enough to have their own WP articles. Nota bene* Woodward has 3 refs - does FA depend upon such notable people having a Wikipedia article? I don't see myself writing a stub just to satisfy this entry. Just needed a Wikilink --Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 15:04, 10 July 2011 (UTC) Bilsborough removed.[reply]
  • References
    • I am no expert on references, but I suggest you go through them carefully before FAC, where one of the real experts such as Nikkimaria will turn an eagle eye on them and will find them wanting (mine usually are!). For instance, the completely blue references such as 20, 37, 40 and so on, the square brackets in 24, the italicisation of the wrong part of ref 51, the anonymous ref 61, the capital letters in 106, the first name before the second in 110, the weird opening of 121, and so on.

Nota bene* We need to decide on one system or another. It would be a shame to make them all use the same system just to be told to revert to another. --Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 15:04, 10 July 2011 (UTC) That concludes my comments. I enjoyed the article, and wish it well. Please let me know when it is at FAC and I will add my two penn'orth there. – Tim riley (talk) 07:59, 7 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Blofeld comments

Great article. Little disappointed though by the Places of worship section. Could you expand it and give more details about the actual church names and a summary of them?♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:52, 6 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

There is actually a draft for this section in my user space at User:Kudpung/Places of worship in Malvern, Worcestershire (draft). I also have photos on my hard disc that I took of all the churches. I never got round to finishing this because I was not sure if it should be a stand-alone article or included in the Malvern article which is already quite long. Suggestions would be much appreciated. --Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 14:20, 6 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

A section on churches that was lurking in the Architecture section has been cut and moved here. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 12:25, 7 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]