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Meta-historical fall

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I've listed this article for peer review because this article that I created has two requests for improvement tags at the top placed there by others, and I'm looking for third-party evaluations to see if any such problems remain. These two tags currently in place are:

This article's tone or style may not reflect the encyclopedic tone used on Wikipedia. (February 2023)
This article may lend undue weight to certain ideas, incidents, or controversies. (February 2023)

Of course, any other ideas for improvements would be much appreciated as well.

Thanks for any help! Jjhake (talk) 02:57, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Update: another editor removed the encyclopedic tone cleanup tag, so that the cleanup tag of "undue weight to certain ideas" is the concern remaining in place. Of course, all improvements with a peer review much appreciated. Jjhake (talk) 13:23, 15 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]