Wikipedia:Peer review/Mohsen Sazegara/archive1

Mohsen Sazegara

I have put a lot of work into this article, and was hoping for some help pointing out any errors I have made or how I may be able to further better this article. Thanks. Pepsi2786 07:20, 5 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The sections are often only a paragraph long, and the paragraphs are often only 1 or 2 sentences. I don't know how much info there is on this guy and whether any of it could be expanded, but otherwise some sections and paragraphs should be linked. The image does not have any documentation proving it is free use. Trebor 19:18, 5 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your review. I appreciate the input. I have combined two of the smaller sections into a single section, and will look at adding some to the section on his arrest. I do not know about the picture.. it may have to be removed, unless the fellow who uploaded it can defend it. I'll send him a message. Thanks again for the review. -- Pepsi2786 07:44, 6 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 01:32, 7 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]