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Murders of Chris Kyle and Chad Littlefield[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because… It has been new and unreviewed for a while now. Thanks, TheBD2000 (talk) 22:48, 21 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I read the article and no problems with grammar, prose, or referencing, but couldn't help but notice: what actually happened during the shooting? In events, you have: "On February 2, 2013 Kyle, along with Chad Littlefield, took Routh to the shooting range." And then what? Presumably, Routh shot them both to death, but the entire reason for the article seems to be omitted here.

For the Trial section, maybe give more information on the trial itself (multiple hearings, outcome, whether or not it's still ongoing). I see he was given life imprisonment in the infobox, but can that be included in the trail section itself?

Information in the perpetrator section is good. Overall, the article just needs to be fluffed out more. I'd check the Death section of Chris Kylie's article for more on the trial. SpartaN (talk) 21:39, 19 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]