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Pablo Honey

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I've listed this article for peer review because I think the article looks great but I am not a Wikipedia expert so I wanna make the article super good. Every other Radiohead album is good or featured so I just want Pablo Honey to catch up

Thanks, WeInTheUSA (talk) 18:40, 10 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@WeInTheUSA: I just checked the article and I did minor fixes. Would you review Basshunter in return? List of issues of found:

Where is there 1,520,000 in reference number 89?
Why there is "UK" and "US" everywhere? It looks for me like these countries has no its names.
"and reached number seven on the UK Singles Chart when EMI rereleased it in September 1993" - "rereleased" than "re-released"?
Reference number 20 to be removed or replaced if needed - it leads to Wikipedia article (not a source).
"They also opened for PJ Harvey in New York City and Los Angeles." - is this correct sentence?
"Critical reception" - I think there is chance for less direct quotations.
"Clash argued that it "points towards everything that [Radiohead] would go on to be"." - "Clash argued"? I would add Editor from Clash argued" if the author is unknown. Same for "In 2007, Pitchfork wrote that".
"In 1996, Colin Greenwood said" - from? He is from Daily Herald? Just noticed it's one of band members - add link for his biography and mention it that he is from the band. Same for the next reviewer.
"O'Brien felt the album was derivative of Dinosaur Jr. and the Pixies,[61] and said in 2020" - if the first paid was said in 1997 I think it would be worth to mention t and noticed it.
No reference for tracklist, credits and personnel section.
I think it would be worth to mention double platinum from Canada in section "Release and promotion" and "1,520,000" number for sales in the United States as well.
"Weekly charts" why there are "1993–1994" and "1996–1997"? You add just highest peaks for one year otherwise it was number 56 in 1996 and 1997 in Sweden?
Links to redirects

Eurohunter (talk) 09:14, 3 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]