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Star Wars Episode V: The Empire Strikes Back

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The content of the article is good enough, however, it would be nice to get this to FA. So, any suggestions as to how? ....(Complain)(Let us to it pell-mell) 22:22, 14 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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The dates problem identified by AndyZ can be fixed quickly: simply copy the entire contents of User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. Then follow the instructions in your monobook to clear the cache (i.e. press Ctrl-Shift-R in Firefox, or Ctrl-F5 in IE) before it will work. This will give you a 'Dates' tab to press in edit mode. Hope that helps. bobblewik 18:47, 15 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Some recent film articles got hammered at the FAC for the number of fair-use images they were using, so may I suggest you cut down. I can suggest the following could be removed: The Rebels being fired upon on Hoth (the previous image is probably enough), and maybe the Bespin image, but see how it goes. But definantly ditch the novel cover and the 1997 poster, trust me, the images need to be kept to a low number. Change "Reaction" to "Reception", and ditch the subheadings, merge notable content into paragraphs, not lists or boxes. The radio drama section doesnt need subheadings and must be turned into paragraphs. The "Error" and "Trivia" lists need to go, though salvage what info is useful, trivia is almost always a cause for objection at the FAC, get it out in my opinon. The description of the films poster in the infobox could be inappropriate, how well known is that comparison? I havent checked this, but make sure all images have fair use rationales and you havent over-wikified things. Also, get rid of the cast table, see Revenge of the Sith/V for Vendetta and other film FAs for ideas. Good luck! Cvene64 14:07, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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