Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 October 3
Starbase Indy needs review for removal of new unreviewed article template
[edit]Hello, I've worked on this article and received some advice on sources and inline references. I think I've moved it correctly to live space. I would appreciate someone reviewing it to see if the "new unreviewed article template" can be removed. Thanks in advance for your help!
Janeway1701 (talk) 00:29, 3 October 2010 (UTC)
- It looks quite good! The template seems to have been removed, however, I've patrolled it just in case. Happy editing! THENEWMONO 03:18, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
Thank you. Yes, someone beat you to it, but I appreciate your taking the time to patrol it, just to be sure nothing was missing. Thanks again! Janeway 1701 Janeway1701 (talk) 15:45, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
I'm just checking to see if article is ok.
Lisa Pelikan (talk) 05:24, 3 October 2010 (UTC)
- Your article needs sources; it will be deleted if they are not provided. This guide should help you out. Post here if you need help. THENEWMONO 03:47, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
Wanted to ask if there was anything else to add/change before I made this stub live.
Nannou7 (talk) 12:55, 3 October 2010 (UTC)
- I think the article needs to be made more simplified, so the average reader can understand. You can do this by adding more links or adding more descriptive/summarising text. I hope you understand this :) Chevymontecarlo - alt 18:42, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
Question
[edit]Can a baby born from a Spanish father and a greek Mother in the UK, hold more than one passport when an adult?
86.156.160.63 (talk) 17:46, 3 October 2010 (UTC)
- This page is for article feedback. Please try the reference desk. Chzz ► 20:37, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
It is a new page. Please tell me how i can improve the quality. It is a stub but i expect a few more people to contribute. The "this article is a stub" box can be added if necessary.
Anirudh Ranganath 19:35, 3 October 2010 (UTC)
- It needs at least some references to independent, reliable sources (e.g. newspapers) to be made a live article, otherwise it might be deleted. See WP:VRS, WP:GNG. Chzz ► 20:40, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
Does this look like an adequate topic and beginning for a new wiki page?
Bradhfeldman (talk) 22:11, 3 October 2010 (UTC)
- It would require references, to independent reliable sources.
launched in July 2010[citation needed] by a group of ophthalmologists[citation needed] working with support from the American Academy of Ophthalmology[citation needed]
...and so on.
- For how to add them, see WP:CITE.
- The list of external links is not appropriate, see WP:EL.
- Please review WP:FIRST. Articles must show why the subject is notable, with appropriate references. Chzz ► 20:42, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
Kmea (talk) 01:10, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
- The links to the referenced articles should be part of the reference itself - I've had a go at adding some, so please look at this edit, and see if they're the right links, and if you can fix others.
- The format for an external links is, for example, [http://www.google.com Google] - which appears as:
- Therefore, a reference can be e.g....
Benefits will be cut from 2013.<ref>[http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-politics-11470983 Child benefit cuts 'tough but necessary' say ministers], BBC News, 4 October 2010 </ref>
Benefits will be cut from 2013.[1]
- ^ Child benefit cuts 'tough but necessary' say ministers, BBC News, 4 October 2010
- I hope that helps. Chzz ► 21:04, 4 October 2010 (UTC)