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The description of this operation was formerly on the Sinai and Palestine Campaign page. It has been re edited to a stand alone article as it was more complex and wide ranging, although of secondary importance.

Rskp (talk) 06:26, 23 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

120.28.76.166 (talk) 07:08, 23 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

As a new editor I would appreciate comments about this page which has been written with input from the subject. I have attempted to remain as neutral as possible.

Thanks.


Dave.rusty (talk) 11:02, 23 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Obsidian1212 (talk) 14:31, 23 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'm a novice Wikipedia article editor. Please help me know if this article needs any modification before being published on-line. Thank You.


Askimwatt (talk) 21:35, 23 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I just created Zynga.org and would appreciate if another editor can review the page and if they see fit, remove the unreviewed page tag. Thanks in advance.

JovanWelks (talk) 21:55, 23 October 2011 (UTC) JovanWelks (talk) 21:55, 23 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Theoallen (talk) 23:06, 23 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]