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01:28:12, 17 April 2017 review of submission by Joslad1

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  • Draft:James Manning (1917-1989) (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Can you please shift the "Sources" section with the two listed books by DT Stewart and JE Traue below the "References" section? Thank youJoslad1 (talk) 01:28, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

Joslad1 (talk) 01:28, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

 Done --Worldbruce (talk) 13:40, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

13:22:07, 17 April 2017 review of submission by Hutchi333

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  • Draft:Troubadour Goods (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Any advice on how to improve the neutral point of view in this article would be much appreciated, thank you! Hutchi333 (talk) 13:22, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

Reply - I would refer you to the document Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view. I would also focus on the history (if notable) rather than your sales pitch. As regards how you might rephrase something in a less advertorial manner, here is an example: "Although a British brand, Troubadour works mostly with Italian suppliers for its vegetable-tanned leather, fabrics and zippers," would be better phrased as, "Some of the textiles and materials used by Troubadour, such as zippers or fabrics, are sourced from Italy." I would also avoid terms like "luxury". Isingness (talk) 18:37, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

17:41:33, 17 April 2017 review of submission by Cecilith

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Riccardo Marchesini (http://www.imdb.com/name/nm8899218/?ref_=tt_ov_dr) is an italian director; unfortunately there is a homonym already in wikipedia, a canoer with the same name! I am trying to create a page for the director! I thought I had enough references to prove he is real! I am not sure now what was wrong.. Please help :-D

Cecilith (talk) 17:41, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

Hi, Cecilith, and welcome to Articles for Creation! It seems like you're just using links to other websites, which is fine, but they aren't formatted properly. Please take a look at WP:Referencing for beginners. Thanks! ProgrammingGeek ^talktome 18:11, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

21:23:00, 17 April 2017 review of submission by WadeDeadpoolWilson

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  • Draft:SwimSwam (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hello, Wade. Did you have a specific question? NewYorkActuary (talk) 21:31, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

 Note: see WP:Articles for deletion/SwimSwam ProgrammingGeek ^talktome 23:07, 17 April 2017 (UTC)