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04:48:08, 20 September 2021 review of submission by Pradeeprwt

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Pradeeprwt (talk) 04:48, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

No sources, no article, no debate. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 06:29, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

06:11:34, 20 September 2021 review of submission by ThopazProductions

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ThopazProductions (talk) 06:11, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This article is hideously undersourced. I also very strongly suggest you change your username to one that doesn't imply shared/official use. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 06:31, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

06:18:12, 20 September 2021 review of submission by Vjayakumarp

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Vjayakumarp (talk) 06:18, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Vjayakumarp: Sam Sailor is dead on - If those are the best sources you have (both are too sparse), then there's no way we would be able to have an article from either a notability or content standpoint. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 06:34, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

07:06:49, 20 September 2021 review of submission by Vjayakumarp

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Vjayakumarp (talk) 07:06, 20 September 2021 (UTC) As aravinda prakash article must be published i wished to take a review of submission[reply]

@Vjayakumar: What is your connexion to Prakash? Also, none of the sources on this draft are any good either: One's missing a byline, another is from an outlet which doesn't seem to have an editor-in-chief listed, a third is a contextless photo, and the last was discussed and dismissed in the section immediately above. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 07:16, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

18:55:47, 20 September 2021 review of draft by Blacktezza

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I have publish my first not sure what to do next — Preceding unsigned comment added by [[User: Blacktezza| Blacktezza]] ([[User talk: Blacktezza#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/ Blacktezza|contribs]])

Note:Original Signature has been lost as somebody else forgot to properly escape a <ref>-Tag, causing the signature not to parse until I fixed the <ref>-Tag Victor Schmidt (talk) 18:58, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

15:42:20, 20 September 2021 review of draft by CharlesSmith87

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Hi there! I'm newer to editing wikipedia pages and want to make sure I am doing the best I can with the most correct information. I saw the ability to create the Brooks Rehabilitation Hospital page as I was going through the Florida Hospital page to provide more context for users. This page could also be submitted as a stub page. Please let me know if there's anything I can do to help improve the submission. Thank you CharlesSmith87 (talk) 15:42, 20 September 2021 (UTC) CharlesSmith87 (talk) 15:42, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

16:08:40, 20 September 2021 review of submission by Ameh Abraham

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Hello, I need some assistance please. My last edited article on Babafemi Badejo, which has been approved, is not constantly visible on a search. Search results does not bring it out for readers. Please is there something I'm not doing rightly or that I need to do? Ameh Abraham (talk) 16:08, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Ameh Abraham: There is a 30-day or NPP grace period on when a page becomes eligible for indexing, whichever comes first. This is to help discourage attempts to use Wikipedia for SEO purposes. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 18:14, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 16:55:21, 20 September 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Romanstuff

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Hello, This artist is notable and the sources i have provided have not been mere mentions they are articles about him and his work. Can i please get a more detailed description of what exactly needs to be removed in order to get this approved? The article is for Shawn Theodore. Romanstuff (talk) 16:55, 20 September 2021 (UTC) Romanstuff[reply]

Romanstuff (talk) 16:55, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Romanstuff: Most of the interviews have substantial ledes that make them usable, if borderline, but https://www.artsy.net/artwork/shawn-theodore-mnemosyne-afrolinquistica-a-portrait-of-poet-laureate-amanda-s-gorman and https://contemporaryand.com/exhibition/prizm-art-fair-2020/ aren't useful sources and should be scrapped. The "He has collaborated on commercial projects..." line also needs to go; it's at best extraneous and at worst an attempt at notability-by-osmosis. Most of the statements in the last paragraph also require attribution. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 18:08, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so MUCH! This is very helpful. I will make those changes and get more sources that are suitable. Romanstuff (talk) 21:21, 21 September 2021 (UTC)romanstuff[reply]

  • Hello again -

I made new edits. Is it possible to get feedback and if it needs more work to get help on the second paragraph?Romanstuff (talk) 02:14, 26 September 2021 (UTC)Romanstuff[reply]

17:14:39, 20 September 2021 review of draft by Yomamajoy

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I Want To Publish A Wikipedia Page On A YouTuber And Its Not Allowing

Yomamajoy (talk) 17:14, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Courtesy link: User:Yomamajoy/sandbox/VA-AV Comedy
@Yomamajoy: Your sources are CNN's homepage and the subject's own YouTube channel. Neither are acceptable (The homepage for being a homepage and the YouTube channel for being a random YouTube channel). —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 17:30, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

19:26:50, 20 September 2021 review of submission by Hildegaaard

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Hello, I have completed the suggested changes. Is the article ready for publication? I have been waiting for additional feedback or publication for a little over a month. Thank you!

Hildegaaard (talk) 19:26, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hildegaaard You have submitted the draft and it is pending, there are hundreds of drafts awaiting review by volunteers, please be patient. 331dot (talk) 19:29, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

22:19:14, 20 September 2021 review of submission by 100.2.125.237

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100.2.125.237 (talk) 22:19, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 23:15:25, 20 September 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by 146.168.115.100

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I want to create an article about my artist entity “TuTxTuT”. I want to show and prove the notability of his music.


146.168.115.100 (talk) 23:15, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The only way you can prove it is by providing multiple strong third-party sources that discuss the subject at length. If those sources do not exist, then a Wikipedia article is out of the question. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Jéské Couriano 06:19, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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