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== GA comments == |
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The article is adequate, and passes [[WP:WIAGA|GA standards]], but there's a few comments to further improve the article: |
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* Try to get more information about his biography. Right now, it is "[[WP:WIAGA|broad]]", but not "[[WP:WIAFA|comprehensive]]". |
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* Are there any other examples of his work? That might help out the article more. |
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* When you get more meat into the biography, remove the "Personal" section and merge its contents there. |
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* The images could be a bit bigger and it would not affect the article's layout. |
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* References are excellent. |
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[[User:Titoxd|Tito]][[Wikipedia:Esperanza|<span style="color:#008000;">xd</span>]]<sup>([[User_talk:Titoxd|?!?]] - [[Wikipedia:WikiProject edit counters/Flcelloguy's Tool|help us]])</sup> 01:37, 28 April 2006 (UTC) |
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Revision as of 01:37, 28 April 2006
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This article was nominated for deletion on 29/3/2006. The result of the discussion was keep. |
 | David Heymann (architect) has been listed as one of the good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: No date specified. To provide a date use: {{GA|insert date in any format here}}. |
GA comments
The article is adequate, and passes GA standards, but there's a few comments to further improve the article:
- Try to get more information about his biography. Right now, it is "broad", but not "comprehensive".
- Are there any other examples of his work? That might help out the article more.
- When you get more meat into the biography, remove the "Personal" section and merge its contents there.
- The images could be a bit bigger and it would not affect the article's layout.
- References are excellent.