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The Place Beyond the Pines has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: September 7, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Rusted AutoParts 17:05, 5 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead/Infobox[edit]

Both look good

Plot[edit]

It's a bit ridiculous, but the plot is just one word in violation of WP:FILMPLOT. It presently sits at 701 words. Tinker with the section to get it under the 700 word maximum.

Y - Done

Cast[edit]

(Issues will also be covering the Casting section)

A few of the names should be cited. Ex: Here's one for Rose Byrne (Has some interesting info in regards to her replacing Greta Gerwig in the role). It can also be used to cite Mahershala Ali.

Y - Done, added citations for the names not mentioned in the casting section. I also mentioned Greta Gerwig in the casting section.

There's still a few names I feel should be cited. I found ones for Ray Liotta and Eva Mendes.
- Y - Thanks, this has been added

Production[edit]

The image of the director's caption should detail something about the film.

Y - Done

Music[edit]

Reception[edit]

I feel the top ten list section should have each individual outlet's source be used instead of an umbrella Metacritic citation.

Y - Done, only the source for 'Den of Geek' couldn't be found, so I put the Metacritic source there

The box office section seems to hold information that would fall more under a Release section. I'd suggest making the Reception section Release, separate the box office info into it's own subsection and if possible track down any information on home media release.
- Y - Ah yes, I've added some info about the home media. I've renamed 'Reception' to 'Release' too and rearranged a paragraph. Thanks. L150 13:25, 7 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References[edit]

Archive all sources. This is especially important as there's a frequently used source in the article, so having an archive in the event the link goes dead would be necessary.

Y - Done

Thank you for reviewing! All the above has been done for now. L150 18:55, 6 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Lizzy150: Right on. Just gonna give another look through the article for any other potential issues. Rusted AutoParts 19:01, 6 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I believe that's a ✓ Pass. Good work. Rusted AutoParts 17:51, 7 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]