Template:Did you know nominations/Mutilator

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:20, 27 April 2012 (UTC)

Mutilator

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• ... that Mutilator appeared after Desaster?

Created by Blackmetalbaz (talk). Nominated by Malconfort (talk) at 17:08, 12 April 2012 (UTC)

• Article looks okay, but that's a really really bad hook. It's so ungrammatical as to be difficult to understand. And even when corrected, "Mutilator first appeared using the name Desaster" is just... bleh. DS (talk) 13:25, 25 April 2012 (UTC)

• Can I use the phrase: "... that Mutilator was described as an excellent case study in DIY ethics?"--Malconfort (talk) 00:21, 26 April 2012 (UTC)

• Yes, that's better. Make sure to link it from the article. DS (talk) 01:29, 26 April 2012 (UTC)

• Done.--Malconfort (talk) 01:36, 26 April 2012 (UTC)

DS (talk) 11:24, 26 April 2012 (UTC)