Template:Did you know nominations/Repretel

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:26, 11 January 2012 (UTC)

Repretel

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• ... that the Costa Rican television broadcaster Repretel was in direct competition with Teletica Channel 7 in 2000 due to its modern equipment?

• Reviewed: Ucu Agustin

Created/expanded by SL93 (talk). Self nom at 17:21, 24 December 2011 (UTC)

• Hook length OK, 5x expansion OK, recency OK, prose length OK... but cited fact not seen in reference [1] on page 118. Please correct reference so that the citation matches the assertion. Jclemens (talk) 23:58, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Oops. I changed it to page 119. It is a combination of two paragraphs. SL93 (talk) 00:09, 25 December 2011 (UTC)
    • Hmm, I think that might be synthesis, awkward, or both. How about:

ALT1: "... that because of competition from Costa Rican television broadcaster Repretel, Teletica Channel 7 was prompted to upgrade its programming and equipment?" Jclemens (talk) 01:14, 25 December 2011 (UTC)

• That sounds fine. I changed the article to reflect that which made the article below the minimum, but I added another fact to bring it up to the 5x expansion. SL93 (talk) 01:28, 25 December 2011 (UTC)

• I re-reviewed the article, everything looks fine, ALT1 hook is better and the concern by Jclemens has been addressed. This is good to go. Zangar (talk) 14:43, 10 January 2012 (UTC)