Template:Did you know nominations/Trial of Anders Behring Breivik

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The result was: rejected by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 12:15, 30 April 2012 (UTC)

Trial of Anders Behring Breivik[edit]

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... that the witness list in the trial of Anders Behring Breivik includes Islamic terrorist leader Mullah Krekar and anti-Islamist blogger Fjordman?

Created/expanded by Zaminamina (self) (talk). Nominated by Zaminamina (talk) at 11:31, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

This is an ongoing account of the trial of Anders Breivik and as such has been contributed to by a number of editors. Zaminamina did start it however and it is long enough and new enough. The hook reference is in Norwegian so taken in good faith and the article generally appears to be well sourced. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:08, 22 April 2012 (UTC)

I am concerned that some of the phrasing used by this article is too close to that of its sources. For example, compare "Prosecutor Svein Holden then outlined Breivik's life in the preceding decade, including lists of failed business ventures, and a year living off savings and playing World of Warcraft, at which mention Breivik apparently broke into a broad grin" with "prosecutor, Svein Holden, outlined Breivik's life in the decade leading up to his attack, making much of his succession of failed businesses, and the year the killer spent living off his savings and playing World of Warcraft...Breivik broke into a broad grin."
Previous comment added by Nikkimaria with these edits Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:39, 22 April 2012 (UTC)