Hello, LisaLW! Welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions to this free encyclopedia. If you decide that you need help, check out Getting Help below, ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}} on your talk page and ask your question there. Please remember to sign your name on talk pages by using four tildes (~~~~) or by clicking if shown; this will automatically produce your username and the date. Finally, please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field. Below are some useful links to facilitate your involvement. Happy editing! Dirk BeetstraTC 15:39, 24 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Reading through the article, it does not read as a proper encyclopedia article, more like a dictionary entry. I found it really difficult to read and did not really get what it was about. I would suggest you try and rewrite it in a more encyclopedia style, and maybe you can find some specialists in a suitable WikiProject (see Wikipedia:WikiProject for a list) who can help you with the article.
Yeah. Essentially, it's not a question of whether we should have an article about the subject, as it is a question of whether we should have that as an article about the subject. DS (talk) 15:41, 24 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]
