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Harry Murray[edit]

Promoted' --ROGER DAVIES talk 05:57, 31 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I am requesting an A-Class review as I have made some quite substantial improvements to this article over the last few weeks, and it was recently passed as GA with no problems whatsoever. I think it covers all the requirements for A-Class, but if not, what improvements need doing? Thanks, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 00:44, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support w/comment Would it be possible to maybe rearrange the reference section so that it becomes two independent sections? Its setup now looks a little wierd, although that in no way subtracts from the wuality of the article. TomStar81 (Talk) 23:42, 28 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Split into single reference section and single bibliography section. Thanks for your support mate, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 00:59, 29 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support. Looks good, I just have a couple issues. First, per WP:CITE, it's preferred for the footnotes section to be named notes and the section with the bibliographic information to be names References. Also, this phrase in the Western Front section seems slightly awkward, you may wish to change it so it says 4-5 February, instead of "On the night of 4–February 5, 1917, the 13th Battalion." Also the following sentence makes no sense and you may wish to rewrite it "On November 11, 1927, with Constance Murray as petitioner, a decree nisi with costs against Henry Murray on the grounds of desertion." All of those are fairly minor issues, however, and I am supporting on the assumption that they will be fixed. Good job and good luck on FA! Borg Sphere (talk) 13:26, 30 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support I could only notice that itt should be Mount Thompson Crematorium according to my source. Other than that, looks good to me. Well done. Woody (talk) 18:13, 30 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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