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== Time for an update == |
== Time for an update == |
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The references are mostly from 2014 -- there must be something newer out there (yes -- I'll see what I can do too). [[User:Kevink707|Kevink707]] ([[User talk:Kevink707|talk]]) 18:58, 1 February 2019 (UTC) |
The references are mostly from 2014 -- there must be something newer out there (yes -- I'll see what I can do too). [[User:Kevink707|Kevink707]] ([[User talk:Kevink707|talk]]) 18:58, 1 February 2019 (UTC) |
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== Needs a rewrite: the tone is like a journalistic article == |
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Should sound encyclopaedic and formal. [[Special:Contributions/2A00:23C5:FE18:2701:61CB:A878:9EFC:DA80|2A00:23C5:FE18:2701:61CB:A878:9EFC:DA80]] ([[User talk:2A00:23C5:FE18:2701:61CB:A878:9EFC:DA80|talk]]) 18:34, 14 July 2022 (UTC) |
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"How People Celebrate" section
Hello. I'm the person who added links to this article for the "Dead-end pages clean up project" and who performed some minor copy editing (e.g. italicizing the names of publications, etc.) to it.
Although I enjoyed the article, I would like to suggest these changes to the section "How People Celebrate":
- Delete the sentence that begins "The holiday is often explained...". I don't see any value in it;
- Definitely delete the "Year / Date" table. It will eventually become outdated. Moreover, most people are intelligent enough to look at a calendar and determine the date for the "first Saturday in February" of a particular year. ("most", maybe not "all" )
--LukasMatt (talk) 07:55, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
Holiday?
It is not a holiday, right? At least it does not match the definition in the Holiday article. It could be described as an "observance day".
Cheers! Syced (talk) 10:12, 28 March 2018 (UTC)
Time for an update
The references are mostly from 2014 -- there must be something newer out there (yes -- I'll see what I can do too). Kevink707 (talk) 18:58, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
Needs a rewrite: the tone is like a journalistic article
Should sound encyclopaedic and formal. 2A00:23C5:FE18:2701:61CB:A878:9EFC:DA80 (talk) 18:34, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
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