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I have begun to edit some of the problematic content on this page, but there is a LOT more to do. Much of the grammar is poor, and much of the content is [[WP:PUFFERY]] and [[WP:PROMO]]. If discussion is needed, let's have it here. [[User:JoJo Anthrax|JoJo Anthrax]] ([[User talk:JoJo Anthrax|talk]]) 15:30, 1 November 2022 (UTC) |
I have begun to edit some of the problematic content on this page, but there is a LOT more to do. Much of the grammar is poor, and much of the content is [[WP:PUFFERY]] and [[WP:PROMO]]. If discussion is needed, let's have it here. [[User:JoJo Anthrax|JoJo Anthrax]] ([[User talk:JoJo Anthrax|talk]]) 15:30, 1 November 2022 (UTC) |
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:{{Re|JoJo_Anthrax}} Thanks for your comment. Could you please show me an example of how to make it better in the article? [[User:Luca boscolo|Luca boscolo]] ([[User talk:Luca boscolo|talk]]) 09:00, 6 November 2022 (UTC) |
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Lots of problems here
I have begun to edit some of the problematic content on this page, but there is a LOT more to do. Much of the grammar is poor, and much of the content is WP:PUFFERY and WP:PROMO. If discussion is needed, let's have it here. JoJo Anthrax (talk) 15:30, 1 November 2022 (UTC)
- @JoJo Anthrax: Thanks for your comment. Could you please show me an example of how to make it better in the article? Luca boscolo (talk) 09:00, 6 November 2022 (UTC)