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I am the new COI editor working on Estee Lauder entities in the encyclopedia. In accordance with Wikipedia policies, I am asking the community to consider making the following improvements and updates to this article:

Adding that he received an Order of Merit, the Italian Ordine al merito del lavoro from Sergio Mattarella in 2015^[1]^[2]
Including additional references and information about Freda's introduction of ESG parameters at Estee Lauder^[2], as well as his direct involvement in the company's fragrance line^[3]
Placing additional sources to support his previous role as president at Procter & Gamble's Global Snacks Division,^[4]^[5], as well as his current role^[6]
Incorporating some of Freda's board affiliations, including the board of BlackRock,^[7] the Advisory Board of the Global Business Initiative at Georgetown University's McDonough School of Business, and the Council for Inclusive Capitalism^[8]^[9]

References

^ Janik, Lucie (24 October 2015). "Fabrizio Freda Honored With 'Cavalieri del Lavoro' Award in Italy". Women's Wear Daily.
^ ^a ^b "Fabrizio Freda, the man who revolutionized Estee Lauder is Italian" (in Italian). 23 February 2021.
^ "In Conversation:Ermenegildo Zegna & Fabrizio Freda". Whitewall Fashion. 3 December 2012.
^ Salas, Abigail (8 April 2019). "Estee Lauder CEO Fabrizio Freda on Inspiring the New Generation of Beauty".
^ Echenique, Sandra (22 June 2022). "His name is Fabrizio Freda" (in Italian).
^ Platero, Mario (22 February 2021). "Fabrizio Freda: the "mister 100 billion" who revolutionized Estee Lauder Companies is Italian". la Republica (in Italian).
^ "Freda, the second highest paid CEO in the US is Italian" (in Italian). 13 June 2022.
^ "Fabrizio Freda, Estee Lauder Companies".
^ Parker, Garrett (8 April 2020). "10 Things You Didn't Know about Fabrizio Freda". Money INC.

Thank you for your attention and assistance in expanding and improving this article Sophie-esteelauder (talk) 13:40, 31 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Not done for now: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. For example, "including additional information" is not clear and does not allow reviewers to accurately assess your request. Actualcpscm (talk) 17:27, 31 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Actualcpscm, thank you for your feedback. I have reformatted my request to clearly outline what I am looking to add and /or modify in the article. I'd appreciate your attention and assistance in making these changes. Happy to discuss and provide additional information if needed. Sophie-esteelauder (talk) 14:29, 1 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

[1] Janik, Lucie (24 October 2015). "Fabrizio Freda Honored With 'Cavalieri del Lavoro' Award in Italy". Women's Wear Daily.

[Cavailer-2] "Fabrizio Freda, the man who revolutionized Estee Lauder is Italian" (in Italian). 23 February 2021.

[3] "In Conversation:Ermenegildo Zegna & Fabrizio Freda". Whitewall Fashion. 3 December 2012.

[4] Salas, Abigail (8 April 2019). "Estee Lauder CEO Fabrizio Freda on Inspiring the New Generation of Beauty".

[Echenique-5] Echenique, Sandra (22 June 2022). "His name is Fabrizio Freda" (in Italian).

[6] Platero, Mario (22 February 2021). "Fabrizio Freda: the "mister 100 billion" who revolutionized Estee Lauder Companies is Italian". la Republica (in Italian).

[7] "Freda, the second highest paid CEO in the US is Italian" (in Italian). 13 June 2022.

[8] "Fabrizio Freda, Estee Lauder Companies".

[9] Parker, Garrett (8 April 2020). "10 Things You Didn't Know about Fabrizio Freda". Money INC.

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 Thank you for your attention and assistance in expanding and improving this article [[User:Sophie-esteelauder|Sophie-esteelauder]] ([[User talk:Sophie-esteelauder|talk]]) 13:40, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
 :[[File:Red information icon with gradient background.svg|20px|link=|alt=]] '''Not done for now:''' it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. <!-- Template:ECOI --> For example, "including additional information" is not clear and does not allow reviewers to accurately assess your request. [[User:Actualcpscm|Actualcpscm]] ([[User talk:Actualcpscm|talk]]) 17:27, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
+::{{u|Actualcpscm}}, thank you for your feedback. I have reformatted my request to clearly outline what I am looking to add and /or modify in the article. I'd appreciate your attention and assistance in making these changes. Happy to discuss and provide additional information if needed. [[User:Sophie-esteelauder|Sophie-esteelauder]] ([[User talk:Sophie-esteelauder|talk]]) 14:29, 1 June 2023 (UTC)