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Notification: Your Articles for Creation submission has been declined (AFCH 0.9.1)
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:What do you mean by:"'''The sections also have excessive information, like lists of architects and dimensions of buildings, which are not [[Wikipedia:N|notable]] details."'''
:What do you mean by:"'''The sections also have excessive information, like lists of architects and dimensions of buildings, which are not [[Wikipedia:N|notable]] details."'''
:You would not list the architects involved in the project? I think its important to know who was involved. I can see its may don't need to go into detail of houses. [[User:BWIEG|BWIEG]] ([[User talk:BWIEG#top|talk]]) 20:33, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
:You would not list the architects involved in the project? I think its important to know who was involved. I can see its may don't need to go into detail of houses. [[User:BWIEG|BWIEG]] ([[User talk:BWIEG#top|talk]]) 20:33, 9 December 2023 (UTC)

== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Bom Sucesso Resort|Bom Sucesso Resort]] (December 11) ==
<div style="border: solid 1px #FCC; background-color: #F8EEBC; padding: 0.5em 1em; color: #000; margin: 1.5em; width: 90%;"> [[File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svg|50px|left]]Your recent article submission to [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for Creation]] has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time.<nowiki> </nowiki>The reason left by PK650 was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This draft's references do not show that the subject [[Wikipedia:Notability|qualifies for a Wikipedia article]]. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are: <br />
* ''[[WP:Notability#General notability guideline|in-depth]]'' (not just passing mentions about the subject)
* [[Wikipedia:Reliable sources|''reliable'']]
* [[Wikipedia:No original research#Secondary|''secondary'']]
* [[Wikipedia:Independent sources|''independent'']] of the subject <br />
Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about [[Wikipedia:Common sourcing mistakes (notability)|mistakes to avoid]] when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}}<!--
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[[User:PK650|PK650]] ([[User talk:PK650|talk]]) 04:50, 11 December 2023 (UTC)</div><!--Template:AfC decline-->

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Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the '''[[Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk|Articles for creation help desk]]'''. If you have any ''other'' questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the '''[[Wikipedia:Teahouse|Teahouse]]''', a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! [[User:PK650|PK650]] ([[User talk:PK650|talk]]) 04:50, 11 December 2023 (UTC)</div>
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Revision as of 04:50, 11 December 2023

Bom Sucesso Resort moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Bom Sucesso Resort. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has too many problems of language or grammar, it is promotional and reads like an advertisement, you may have a possible Conflict of Interest and in particular, I think this article is about a notable subject, and that you have a lot of good content in the page. Thanks very much for your work sharing information about the resort and its importance. However, the language reads as being more promotional than encyclopedic, with terms in the introduction like "is a testament to", "unique", "iconic", and "meticulously designed". Phrases like "I'm not going to talk about architecture here" likewise do not match the style of an encyclopedia, which should be written from a neutral point of view. The sections also have excessive information, like lists of architects and dimensions of buildings, which are not notable details.. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Astrophobe (talk) 20:29, 24 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Astrophobe.
Thank you for your feedback!
What do you mean by:"The sections also have excessive information, like lists of architects and dimensions of buildings, which are not notable details."
You would not list the architects involved in the project? I think its important to know who was involved. I can see its may don't need to go into detail of houses. BWIEG (talk) 20:33, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bom Sucesso Resort (December 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by PK650 was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
PK650 (talk) 04:50, 11 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Hello, BWIEG! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! PK650 (talk) 04:50, 11 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]