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I have a couple very small updates that I think would help improve this page. I’m a friend of the subject so I’ll leave this to the judgment of others.

1.' In the Career section, under the Early career subsection, please add a sentence to become the new fourth sentence. The inclusion of Freund’s work in a prominent national museum, which is also Notable by Wikipedia standards, is a noteworthy aspect of his career. I have cited a primary source here to establish a bare fact:

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The original art for the Bedtime for Brezhnev is in the permanent collection of the American Museum of American History at the Smithsonian.^[1]

2. Please update the third sentence of the Personal life section to add basic biographical details about Freund’s wife, Linda Grais. Her position is mentioned in the SEC document cited to confirm their marriage, but I have added a second independent source as further clarification.

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Freund is married to Linda S. Grais.^[2]

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Freund is married to Linda S. Grais,^[3] a physician and biotech entrepreneur. ^[4]

I appreciate you taking the time to review these additions.Coffeegirl1 (talk) 16:20, 10 May 2024 (UTC) Coffeegirl1 (talk) 16:20, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

^ "Collections". National Museum of American History. Retrieved 6 February 2024.
^ "SEC Schedule 14a". sec.gov. Retrieved 14 July 2023.
^ "SEC Schedule 14a". sec.gov. Retrieved 14 July 2023.
^ Garde, Damian (15 October 2015). "PRA adds a biotech vet to its board amid an expansion effort". Fierce Biotech. Retrieved 5 February 2024.

[1] "Collections". National Museum of American History. Retrieved 6 February 2024.

[2] "SEC Schedule 14a". sec.gov. Retrieved 14 July 2023.

[3] "SEC Schedule 14a". sec.gov. Retrieved 14 July 2023.

[4] Garde, Damian (15 October 2015). "PRA adds a biotech vet to its board amid an expansion effort". Fierce Biotech. Retrieved 5 February 2024.

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+{{edit COI}} I have a couple very small updates that I think would help improve this page. I’m a friend of the subject so I’ll leave this to the judgment of others.
+''1.''' In the Career section, under the Early career subsection, please add a sentence to become the new fourth sentence. The inclusion of Freund’s work in a prominent national museum, which is also Notable by Wikipedia standards, is a noteworthy aspect of his career. I have cited a primary source here to establish a bare fact:
+Add:
+The original art for the ''Bedtime for Brezhnev'' is in the permanent collection of the American Museum of American History at the Smithsonian.<ref>{{cite web |title=Collections |url=https://americanhistory.si.edu/collections/nmah_533410 |website=National Museum of American History |access-date=6 February 2024}}</ref>
+'''2'''. Please update the third sentence of the Personal life section to add basic biographical details about Freund’s wife, Linda Grais. Her position is mentioned in the SEC document cited to confirm their marriage, but I have added a second independent source as further clarification.
+From:
+Freund is married to Linda S. Grais.<ref>{{cite web |title=SEC Schedule 14a |url=https://www.sec.gov/Archives/edgar/data/1274644/000104746914004348/a2219959zdef14a.htm |website=sec.gov |access-date=14 July 2023}}</ref>
+To:
+Freund is married to Linda S. Grais,<ref>{{cite web |title=SEC Schedule 14a |url=https://www.sec.gov/Archives/edgar/data/1274644/000104746914004348/a2219959zdef14a.htm |website=sec.gov |access-date=14 July 2023}}</ref> a physician and biotech entrepreneur. <ref>{{cite news |last1=Garde |first1=Damian |title=PRA adds a biotech vet to its board amid an expansion effort |url=https://www.fiercebiotech.com/cro/pra-adds-a-biotech-vet-to-its-board-amid-an-expansion-effort |access-date=5 February 2024 |work=Fierce Biotech |date=15 October 2015}}</ref>
+I appreciate you taking the time to review these additions.[[User:Coffeegirl1|Coffeegirl1]] ([[User talk:Coffeegirl1|talk]]) 16:20, 10 May 2024 (UTC) [[User:Coffeegirl1|Coffeegirl1]] ([[User talk:Coffeegirl1|talk]]) 16:20, 10 May 2024 (UTC)