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::Thank you [[User:Zippybonzo|Zippybonzo]] for reviewing these proposals and your response. Even with your go ahead, I would still prefer others to make this edit on my behalf due to my conflict of interest. Would it be possible for you to do this? Thanks [[User:Yules2023|Yules2023]] ([[User talk:Yules2023|talk]]) 22:47, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
::Thank you [[User:Zippybonzo|Zippybonzo]] for reviewing these proposals and your response. Even with your go ahead, I would still prefer others to make this edit on my behalf due to my conflict of interest. Would it be possible for you to do this? Thanks [[User:Yules2023|Yules2023]] ([[User talk:Yules2023|talk]]) 22:47, 29 February 2024 (UTC)

== Edit to intro and update image ==

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Hello Wikipedia, my name is Yuliana. I am an employee of Humana and so I have a paid conflict of interest. I would like to make requests for updates to this article about Humana CEO Bruce D. Broussard.
I have a few suggestions for the time being. This addresses a couple grammar edits in intro and updating Broussard's image.

For the introduction, the sentence "Since, 2013, Broussard has served as" needs the first comma removed. This should be "Since 2013, Broussard has served as".

Also, the sentence "Broussard participates business advocacy organizations" needs a preposition. This should be "Broussard participates '''in''' business advocacy organizations"

Secondly, please consider using [https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Bruce_D._Broussard_Headshot_2020.jpg|this updated image of Bruce on Wikimedia Commons] that has been donated by Humana.

Please let me know if there are any questions or concerns. Thank you. [[User:Yules2023|Yules2023]] ([[User talk:Yules2023|talk]]) 13:40, 15 May 2024 (UTC)

Revision as of 13:40, 15 May 2024

Communication

A Centerwell employee just told me that the distribution department doesn’t communicate with the website other than taking orders. i want a cancel or delete button on the website for when I make a mistake or change my mind. I suggested she spoke to her bosses about doing it and she said they don’t communicate with Bruce Broussard either. they have an opportunity to build something beautiful for seniors but communication is the key to it. hey Bruce, can you hear me? User friendly for seniors! 2605:59C8:43F8:4410:3168:6552:FDF2:A7CD (talk) 22:35, 26 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Biography section

Hello Wikipedia, my name is Yuliana. I am an employee of Humana and so I have a paid conflict of interest. I would like to make requests for updates to this article about Humana CEO Bruce D. Broussard.

I would like to propose changes to the Biography section

First, I would like to suggest it be renamed to Early life and education as this is more encompassing.

Second, I would like to suggest removing "Broussard's mother, Sandy, raised Broussard and his two sisters, while working outside the home until her death in 1992." because this is unsourced.

Third, I would like to suggest removing "When Broussard was in 7th grade, his family adopted a Vietnamese family upon their displacement from Vietnam following the Vietnam war." because this is sourced to a Youtube video, which to my understanding is not allowed by Wikipedia's rules.

Please let me know if there are any questions or concerns. Thank you. Yules2023 (talk) 14:48, 21 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Go ahead: I have reviewed these proposed changes and suggest that you go ahead and make the proposed changes to the page. Zippybonzo | talk | contribs (they/them) 19:51, 25 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you Zippybonzo for reviewing these proposals and your response. Even with your go ahead, I would still prefer others to make this edit on my behalf due to my conflict of interest. Would it be possible for you to do this? Thanks Yules2023 (talk) 22:47, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Edit to intro and update image

Hello Wikipedia, my name is Yuliana. I am an employee of Humana and so I have a paid conflict of interest. I would like to make requests for updates to this article about Humana CEO Bruce D. Broussard.

I have a few suggestions for the time being. This addresses a couple grammar edits in intro and updating Broussard's image.

For the introduction, the sentence "Since, 2013, Broussard has served as" needs the first comma removed. This should be "Since 2013, Broussard has served as".

Also, the sentence "Broussard participates business advocacy organizations" needs a preposition. This should be "Broussard participates in business advocacy organizations"

Secondly, please consider using updated image of Bruce on Wikimedia Commons that has been donated by Humana.

Please let me know if there are any questions or concerns. Thank you. Yules2023 (talk) 13:40, 15 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]