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::: Can I offer an even more direct alternative hook? And {{u|Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d}}, if you're not feeling this, you can strike it. [[User:Rjjiii|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;">Rjj<sup>iii</sup></span>]] ([[User talk:Rjjiii#top|talk]]) 19:16, 10 June 2024 (UTC) |
::: Can I offer an even more direct alternative hook? And {{u|Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d}}, if you're not feeling this, you can strike it. [[User:Rjjiii|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;">Rjj<sup>iii</sup></span>]] ([[User talk:Rjjiii#top|talk]]) 19:16, 10 June 2024 (UTC) |
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* '''ALT2''': ... that the inaugural article of '''[[Answers Research Journal|one creationist journal]]''' claims that [[HIV]] goes back to the [[fall of man|biblical Fall]]? |
* '''ALT2''': ... that the inaugural article of '''[[Answers Research Journal|one creationist journal]]''' claims that [[HIV]] goes back to the [[fall of man|biblical Fall]]? |
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:I prefer the Alt1 hook still. Alt2 just seems a bit wordy. [[User:Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d|Dr. Swag Lord]] ([[User talk:Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d|talk]]) 19:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC) |
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Answers Research Journal
- ... that HIV has its origins in the Fall, according to one journal? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: Template:Did_you_know_nominations/George_Kunkel_(theatre_manager)
- Comment: If preferred, the 'according to the journal' clause can be in the beginning.
Created by Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.
Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 22:48, 22 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: 
LGTM, tho I don't love the hook. Given that this is Psuedoscience territory, it might be best to err on the side of being a bit verbose.
How about ALT 1: ... that according to one creationist journal, HIV has its origins in the Fall?
Thoughts Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d? Sohom (talk) 21:59, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- Sohom Datta, Alt1 looks good to me! Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 23:37, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
Approved, per above. Sohom (talk) 00:36, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- Can I offer an even more direct alternative hook? And Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d, if you're not feeling this, you can strike it. Rjjiii (talk) 19:16, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the inaugural article of one creationist journal claims that HIV goes back to the biblical Fall?
- I prefer the Alt1 hook still. Alt2 just seems a bit wordy. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 19:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)