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There's no image copyright issues, since there are images in the article ;). No neutrality issues. However the lead [[WP:LEDE]] is too short, and the citations sometimes put right before the comma or period - not good. The reference density (number of sources per paragraph) is good, and would be very good if there were many more paragraphs like these. The article may have around a 50% chance of passing.◙◙◙ '''[[User:Kmarinas86| I M Kmarinas86 ]][[User talk:Kmarinas86| U O 2¢ ]]''' ◙◙◙ 06:50, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
There's no image copyright issues, since there are images in the article ;). No neutrality issues. However the lead [[WP:LEDE]] is too short, and the citations sometimes put right before the comma or period - not good. The reference density (number of sources per paragraph) is good, and would be very good if there were many more paragraphs like these. The article may have around a 50% chance of passing.◙◙◙ '''[[User:Kmarinas86| I M Kmarinas86 ]][[User talk:Kmarinas86| U O 2¢ ]]''' ◙◙◙ 06:50, 11 June 2007 (UTC)

:I was reviewing this, so edit conflict. But I've failed its GA nom. Reasons: Lead is to short, NPOV issues ("It is a challenging piece, employing graphic scores and written directions to the players containing notes and motifs to be followed, and the players' creativity is stimulated by words and phrases in the score"), no images. - [[User:G1ggy|<font color="green">G</font>]][[WP:FING|<font color="black">1</font>]][[User:G1ggy|<font color="green">ggy</font>]] <sup>[[ User_talk:G1ggy |<font color="red">Talk</font>]]</sup>/<sub>[[User:G1ggy/Contribs |Contribs]]</sub> 07:23, 11 June 2007 (UTC)

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There's no image copyright issues, since there are images in the article ;). No neutrality issues. However the lead WP:LEDE is too short, and the citations sometimes put right before the comma or period - not good. The reference density (number of sources per paragraph) is good, and would be very good if there were many more paragraphs like these. The article may have around a 50% chance of passing.◙◙◙ I M Kmarinas86 U O 2¢ ◙◙◙ 06:50, 11 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I was reviewing this, so edit conflict. But I've failed its GA nom. Reasons: Lead is to short, NPOV issues ("It is a challenging piece, employing graphic scores and written directions to the players containing notes and motifs to be followed, and the players' creativity is stimulated by words and phrases in the score"), no images. - G1ggy Talk/Contribs 07:23, 11 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]