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:Odd question really, how can you "believe in" an explanation for a set of facts? It would be like saying you "believe in" general relativity. [[User:TimVickers|Tim Vickers]] ([[User talk:TimVickers|talk]]) 19:32, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
:Odd question really, how can you "believe in" an explanation for a set of facts? It would be like saying you "believe in" general relativity. [[User:TimVickers|Tim Vickers]] ([[User talk:TimVickers|talk]]) 19:32, 16 September 2009 (UTC)

::Not so odd given that evolutionism is a fact only because it is derived from Naturalism which is a philosophical belief. That's why the majority of people in the US don't believe it true. They don't buy Naturalism's--The Cosmos is all there is, has ever been, or ever will be" clueless mantra. [[User:Christian Skeptic|Christian Skeptic]] ([[User talk:Christian Skeptic|talk]]) 19:47, 16 September 2009 (UTC)


==Attention fellow atheists==
==Attention fellow atheists==

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Heads up re Macroevolution

This edit seemed to me to introduce a rather incoherent fringe spin on an issue already mentioned in the macroevolution article. I've moved it to talk:macroevolution, and would be grateful if it could be given expert review. Thanks, dave souza, talk 18:48, 20 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Second Paragraph

I'm going through the article very slowly - in so much as I am reading it a paragraph or so and then coming back to it a couple of days later and re-reading. I made some grammatical changes to the first para recently but this is a bit more complex so I'm coming to the talk page (especially as I've been away from the article for several months so I'm not party to the recent discussions)..

I'm a little concerned by the second paragraph. This part in particular:

The basis of evolution is the genes that are passed on from generation to generation; these produce an organism's inherited traits. These traits vary within populations, with organisms showing heritable differences (variation) in their traits.

The first sentence is fine. The second one not (to my mind at least).

I'm not going to quibble about the traits varying. To my mind their is variety in the alleles but I can understand why traits is used as it is a friendlier and more "visual" term. It also leads on to the rest of the paragraph.

However, variation in brackets doesn't help comprehension (These traits vary ... showing variation in their traits (to paraphrase). A bit of tautology there? Also, the heritable difference in their traits is a partial repeat of genes that are passed on ... in the first sentence.

That second sentence has somehow lost its way.

I'm not certain what the article needs to state here. I offer up simply:

Traits vary within a species and within populations. ' ' Please continue ... --Candy (talk) 20:41, 23 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The only difficulty here is that we're trying to be careful about the colloquial understanding of a 'trait', which can be any property, not just an inheritable one. The purpose of reiterating the "heritable" aspect of traits is to protect the entire rest of the article from potential misunderstandings about what is and isn't a 'trait' (or what 'traits' are and aren't relevant to evolution). I also think that including "(variation)" in parentheses here is excusable partly on the grounds that it's a useful wikilink, in addition to a common and important term for the rest of the article, which would be lost if we removed it from the lead or pipelinked it. (Even pipelinking it from "vary" would lose most of its utility and clarity, since most people don't notice pipelinks.) Usually I don't like even a hint of redundancy, but in this case it seems like it could only help those who are completely unfamiliar with Evolution, and couldn't harm anyone who's already quite familiar. People often don't consciously notice etymologically linked verbs and nouns unless they look very similar. -Silence (talk) 18:11, 24 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think the tautology is excusable. If you know some basics about evolution than it becomes confusing I feel and could even start that sort of audience to question whether this article is a seriously written affair. Why not simply rewrite the sentence such as: Populations show variation and heritable differences in their traits. ? This then removes the passive tenses as well as tautology? What is true for organisms as also true in this respect for populations, --Candy (talk) 16:44, 28 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
How about something like, "Because x, traits vary in a population" (x can be:"genes may mutate, are recombined in sexual reproduction, and because several diferent genes may be required to produce a given trait" or something like that. The first sentnce has two halvs, talking about genes in the first half and traits in the second. The distinction is important as it naturl selection acts on traits. But anyway, I was just trying to follow the same structure. Slrubenstein | Talk 19:22, 28 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Missing information

The article is very well done but it fails to mention that evolution is a scientific theory. In support of presenting the facts in an accurate manner, I have to ask why this there is no mention of said Theory status, —Preceding unsigned comment added by WhoIsJ (talkcontribs) 03:10, 28 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Please see Question 3 of the FAQ above and Evolution as theory and fact. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 03:12, 28 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The word theory is used extensively in the "History of evolutionary thought" section of the article.--Charles (talk) 08:30, 28 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I read the article, and it seems imcomplete to me. For one, it never answers, "What is evolution?". It only says "the process of change', but not why or how. Making it seem to have extra qualities, as if it can think. Same goes for Natural Selection. Yes, we know how it works, why it works and what causes it are never adressed. If it were, it would probably take a religious turn, but since this artcle seems to be an atheist's POV, could you try and find a reason for such changes, without just "Evolution is change". Which is pretty obvious. Mwarriorjsj7 (talk) 21:58, 31 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

How about this definition "evolution is a generation-to-generation change in the frequencies of alleles within a population that shares a common gene pool.", see section 2.3 The "why" and "how" questions are addressed in section 3, which discusses mechanisms. Tim Vickers (talk) 22:16, 31 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Introduction to evolution FA review

Thompsma has nominated Introduction to evolution for a featured article review here. Please join the discussion on whether this article meets featured article criteria. Articles are typically reviewed for two weeks. If substantial concerns are not addressed during the review period, the article may be moved to the Featured Article Removal Candidates list for a further period, where editors may declare "Keep" or "Remove" with regard to the article's featured status. The instructions for the review process are here. -Silence (talk) 21:16, 10 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Hinduism

One of the earliest parallels with Darwinism and evolution is seen by some (like the geneticist and evolutionary biologist JBS Haldane) in the Dasavatara tradition of Hinduism..<ref>http://www.americanchronicle.com/articles/view/101713</ref>

I can't access this source and this seems an unusual claim. Can anybody else verify this and how important do people think this is? Tim Vickers (talk) 02:58, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The source is clearly not reliable, per the disclaimer at the bottom which includes "This website and its affiliates have no responsibility for the views, opinions and information communicated here. The contributor(s) and news providers are fully responsible for their content." At any rate, the material seems pretty unhelpful. Johnuniq (talk) 05:33, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Not to mention, um, patently absurd. (Fish -> Tortoise -> Boar -> Man-Lion -> Dwarf -> Human = Evolution????) The Dasavatara#Similarity_to_Darwinism_and_evolution section is also a very clear candidate for erasure. -Silence (talk) 06:32, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, the Man-Lion -> Dwarf seems suspect. Man-Lion -> part in the patriotic film Meet the People -> costarring in a much-praised version of Waiting for Godot....oh, wait I'm confusing it with the guy who played the lion in The Wizard of Oz. Nevermind. Sean.hoyland - talk 08:32, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Guys, as man-lions run out of food in their range, nature selects for them to become smaller and smaller so as to require less energy. Until they become dwarfs. Isn't this obvious? Slrubenstein | Talk 09:01, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
When I entered *parallels* I meant just that. The fact is that there exists the Dasavatara concept, and that it has certain similarities with evolution. Nothing more and nothing less is being claimed. Dunno what qualifies as "patently absurd"! Maybe Human->Dwarf->.....Fish is more "patently absurd." That said, I agree that more reliable and "respectable" sources are needed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by GOC-in-C (talkcontribs) 09:14, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

(unindent) I stand with the "absurd" camp. A great many societies believe that over time some animals transformed into others, including people. This is widely documented for native peoples of the Americas, see Claude levi-Strauss's Mythologiques or the much shorter the Story of Lynx - if by "Darwinism" we simply meant the mutability of species, we would not single out India or any other part of the world, we would just say that outside of Abrahamic religions the belief in the mutability of species is almost universal. However I do not think that the mutability of species is the key point in Darwinism. Darwin's brilliant idea is natural selection. Of all the mythos of all the Native Peoples of the Americas I know, from the Athabascins to the Mapuche, in no case is mutability the result of natural selection. I do not believe this is the case for Hinduism either. I would have no objection to having some article point out that the belief in the mutability of species - more in a Lamarkian sense than a Darwinian - is widespread. But I would never say this constitutes a parallele with Darwinism. What matters is natural selection. I don't know of any parallel to that. Slrubenstein | Talk 09:39, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

And branching common descent! While Darwin was completely original in his brilliant development of his ideas, he wasn't unique. For example, see the historical sketch written in response to all those trying to jump on the bandwaggon. The bandwaggon jumping continues with some very stretched claims for various cultures. As Slrubenstein rightly says, the idea that species are mutable was commonplace, the belief that species are fixed and are essentially defined by always reproducing the same species, with variation allowed within the species, is an odd quirk of the last few centuries of Christianity, introduced by John Ray in the late 17th century. A word of caution: Darwinism largely included what we call Lamarckism in the late 19th century, until the convention developed that Darwinism meant natural selection. . . dave souza, talk 10:10, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Point taken. But then do I believe Anaximander, Empedocles, Al Jahiz, the brethren of purity and others mentioned were proponents of natural selection? I'm a little handicapped on this topic, but either they should be given priority over Darwin for Darwinism, or not be mentioned in this article at all. Further, if transmutation in mythologies have been studied in so much detail, as they seem to have been, then it merits either a new section or a separate article on (pseudo or lamarckian?) evolutionary theories of the ancient world. GOC-in-C —Preceding unsigned comment added by GOC-in-C (talkcontribs) 11:10, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Well, I guess the simplest thing to say would be, that Darwin was the only one of the bunch to convince all other life scientists of his theory. One reason was he compiles careful evidence - certainly more carefully and more detailed than those listed here. Also, the ones you list, at least Empedocles and Al Jahiz, seem teleological, or to believe that evolution has a direction, that some species are superior to others. In Darwin's view evolution is an ongoing process and what appears to be fit now will turn out not to be fit in the future. From what I have read 9which I admit is not a lot) all the people you mention are still in some way providing an origin myth i.e. atarting out with some chaotic beginning and ending with the present order of things. That is not the Darwinian theory of evolution, which has no end, and no ultimate order. Slrubenstein | Talk 13:17, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Discussing recombination

Recently I noticed that this article uses 'genetic recombination' to refer to recombination that occurs during in meiosis and brings about genetic diversity among organisms. This isn't necessarily correct: genetic recombination can also refer to non-homologous end joining (NHEJ) or V(D)J recombination, neither of which, to my knowledge, occur during meiosis or produce heritable genetic diversity among organisms. To account for that, I think it would be helpful to replace instances of 'genetic recombination' with 'homologous recombination', the type of genetic recombination to which this article refers. What are others' thoughts on this? The only drawback I could see would be the slightly less reader-friendly word 'homologous'. This, however, seems clarified by the first sentence in the 'Sex and recombination' section to invoke the phrase: "In the related process of genetic recombination, sexual organisms can also exchange DNA between two matching chromosomes." If the inaccessibility of the word 'homologous' were in fact a drawback, I think it would be more than compensated for by the greater accuracy of the information being presented to the reader.

Yesterday I tried introducing this change, but was reverted. In the summary of that reversion, the editor noted: "why be less general? homologous excludes translocations, duplications, fusions, etc." I've offered my rationale for being specific just above, but was curious about the second sentence. If homologous recombination excludes translocations, duplications, fusions, etc., then is that somehow accounted for by other types of genetic recombination, like NHEJ or V(D)J recombanation? To my understanding, it is a failure of homologous recombination in meiosis that produces heritable chromosome translocations, fusions, and gene duplications. Emw2012 (talk) 14:13, 16 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I think you are correct, being more accurate is better since the sentence does refer specifically to matching chromosomes. I've reworded this to state In a related process called homologous recombination, sexual organisms exchange DNA between two matching chromosomes. I've added the idea of general recombination to the previous section, adding Mutations can involve large sections of DNA becoming duplicated, usually through genetic recombination.[1] Tim Vickers (talk) 17:33, 16 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Charles Darwin film 'too controversial for religious America'

"A British film about Charles Darwin has failed to find a US distributor because his theory of evolution is too controversial for American audiences, according to its producer." [1] --Atomic blunder (talk) 19:22, 16 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

39% of Americans say they "believe in the theory of evolution"

A new Gallup Poll shows that only 39% of Americans say they "believe in the theory of evolution".[2] --Atomic blunder (talk) 19:28, 16 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Odd question really, how can you "believe in" an explanation for a set of facts? It would be like saying you "believe in" general relativity. Tim Vickers (talk) 19:32, 16 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Not so odd given that evolutionism is a fact only because it is derived from Naturalism which is a philosophical belief. That's why the majority of people in the US don't believe it true. They don't buy Naturalism's--The Cosmos is all there is, has ever been, or ever will be" clueless mantra. Christian Skeptic (talk) 19:47, 16 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Attention fellow atheists

The time is upon us to take a stand. We must crush those repugnant creationists with our superior intellect in order to defend Darwin's honour! Their belief is wrong! WRONG!

WHO'S WITH ME?????? —Preceding unsigned comment added by GSTQuk (talkcontribs) 19:40, 16 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  1. ^ Hastings, P J (2009). "Mechanisms of change in gene copy number". Nature Reviews. Genetics. 10 (8): 551–564. doi:10.1038/nrg2593. PMID 19597530. {{cite journal}}: Unknown parameter |coauthors= ignored (|author= suggested) (help)