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	Reasoning for assessment: more text, pics and refs required to make this a start standard. It is rated as Mid as there are a number of imporetant alumni and this is one of the few schools with an English page in Indonesiaa. Good list below. Welcome Victuallers 18:19, 31 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Possible future materials to add:

Symbols, Photos (will probably taken from soft copy of yearbook, of course passed via photoshop)
Facilities
Education System
- hours, classes, IPA IPS, etc
- uniqueness, such as:
  - no cheating (nyontek) policy
  - variable school fee (uncommon in western world, no?)
list of prestiges
Extracurricular activities (will probably taken from soft copy of yearbook)
Events
- Percasis
- CC Cup
- Jambore
- Science Competition
Alumni
List of past principals?
External Links
- Website Kanisius (still constructing, what are those guys doing back there...)
- Website Alumni

Anything Else?

I'll need help with most of them.... --Kyokushi 11:23, 14 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Proofread

I have done a major proofreading job on this article, but it still needs more work. I have left things I wasn't sure about untouched, but I will come back in a week or so and do some more editing to remove the bits I don't understand. By the way, I have visited the school many times, so have some familiarity with the subject matter of this article. Come on Canisuius students! Get editing... Davidelit 13:46, 4 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Too much details

Perhaps you can make the article to be more concise and cut out the minutia details, such as the year the school staged a musical with another school. Such minutia details might not be appropriate for an encyclopaedia.

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 I have done a major proofreading job on this article, but it still needs more work. I have left things I wasn't sure about untouched, but I will come back in a week or so and do some more editing to remove the bits I don't understand. By the way, I have visited the school many times, so have some familiarity with the subject matter of this article. Come on Canisuius students! Get editing... [[User:Davidelit|Davidelit]] 13:46, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
+==Too much details==
+Perhaps you can make the article to be more concise and cut out the minutia details, such as the year the school staged a musical with another school. Such minutia details might not be appropriate for an encyclopaedia.