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First Muslim ?

"Nazem is the first Muslim,[2] and second person of Lebanese descent to be drafted in the NHL draft"

The article used as a reference says it's the first muslim drafted in the NHL by the Toronto Maple Leafs and not in the entire league. And Ramzi Abid is muslim too and was drafted before Kadri. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mapleleaf76 (talk • contribs) 19:01, 15 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"from the tiny village of Kfardenis"

-As per stated in this article. (http://www.nhl.com/ice/news.htm?id=425702) (Sorry, my wiki-fu is super rusty, otherwise I'd add it myself.) 216.162.79.127 (talk) 17:07, 7 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

No problem, thanks for the link - I'll add it in.Canada Hky (talk) 17:39, 7 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Personal Life

This section is confusing as to whether it is talking about Nazem or his father Sam. The section goes back and forth using "he" without being clear which "he" it is referring to. I was taught when you use "he" it refers to the last person mentioned by name. This means some parts about Nazem read like they are about Sam. Any Comments? (99.245.165.37 (talk) 00:59, 28 September 2010 (UTC))[reply]

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	This section is confusing as to whether it is talking about Nazem or his father Sam. The section goes back and forth using "he" without being clear which "he" it is referring to. I was taught when you use "he" it refers to the last person mentioned by name. This means some parts about Nazem read like they are about Sam. I ~~would~~ ~~correct this myself but am unsure if this is generally accepted in Wiki as well.~~ ([[Special:Contributions/99.245.165.37\|99.245.165.37]] ([[User talk:99.245.165.37\|talk]]) 00:59, 28 September 2010 (UTC))		This section is confusing as to whether it is talking about Nazem or his father Sam. The section goes back and forth using "he" without being clear which "he" it is referring to. I was taught when you use "he" it refers to the last person mentioned by name. This means some parts about Nazem read like they are about Sam. Any Comments? ([[Special:Contributions/99.245.165.37\|99.245.165.37]] ([[User talk:99.245.165.37\|talk]]) 00:59, 28 September 2010 (UTC))