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Deletion of Third war of panipat:story of the captured maratha POWs

Anandsh16 (talk) 17:47, 20 June 2016 (UTC) Hi Jimfbleak, I just saw that Third war of panipat:story of the captured maratha POWs was deleted. Please note that the story of what happened to the 22000 people captured and transported to balochistan from india was largely unknown. The story is recently published in one of the leading Marathi magazines and well received by the general public. I have valid references . Can you please restore the page.

Anandsh16, I'll have a look in the morning and see what needs doing. I'll probably be able to sandbox it for you if there are problems Jimfbleak - talk to me? 18:15, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

Anandsh16, draft already exists at Draft:Third war of panipat:story of the captured maratha POWs Jimfbleak - talk to me? 18:18, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

Anandsh16, your draft is nowhere near ready for posting as an article yet, much of it still lacks independent verifiable sources. Apart from unsourced text, it was also full of highly POV commentary, opinions and loaded language rather than facts. I've tried to clean up the text, but there is more to be done. I've also changed to Indian English spelling, rather than US, as more appropriate and fixed a couple of the refs. Let me know if you have any queries Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:16, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

Anandsh16 (talk) 06:25, 21 June 2016 (UTC) thanks Jimfbleak, I will make the necessary changes

Jimfbleak 11:32 ,21 June 2016 (UTC) can you please review the draft now and let me know your comments.

Anandsh16, I'll take a look, probably be tomorrow though Jimfbleak - talk to me? 12:52, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

Jimfbleak ,Thanks for your updates. can I submit the draft for review. Can you please advise.Anandsh16 (talk) 12:09, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Anandsh16, I would make the lead section more factual, giving the background, and move the current highly emotive text further down, perhaps to the culture section. Check your text for WP:Weasel words; I removed about eight "famous"s from the last section. That's an opinion, and looks non-neutral. Also avoid overlinking, you link Ahmad Shah Durrani every time he's mentioned, should be just on first occurrence. Also note that the topic should use Indian English spelling, given its topic, not US. I don't think it's ready as it stands, but it's on the way Jimfbleak - talk to me? 13:21, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Jimfbleak Thanks for the advise. Can you please tell me how to set Indian English spelling Anandsh16 (talk) 14:59, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Anandsh16, basically the same as British English, eg colour, favour, behaviour, end in -ise rather than -ize. If you are not sure, leave it and I'll fix. I have a Firefox BE dictionary extension which underlines spelling "mistakes" which includes US spelling, so it's easy for me. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 16:06, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Jimfbleak , I made the changes suggested by you. Can you please kindly take a look and let me know --Anandsh16 (talk) 12:36, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Anandsh16, I've started a copy edit, but I've run out of time, so I'll finish tomorrow and make any comments then Jimfbleak - talk to me? 16:09, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Anandsh16, I made these edits. YouTube is not normally acceptable as a reference, and may be removed by a bot, so you should try to replace those. The article title is a bit clunky, but I don't know what would be better. Once you have fixed the last two refs, I suggest that you submit it for review, Jimfbleak - talk to me? 19:02, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Deletetion of Rochelle Potkar's Wiki page

Hello Jimfbleak, recently an article I was working on was deleted under section A7, ref Rochelle Potkar. Making this page for a friend of mine, Rochelle, who is a known personality in the literary circles. There are many newspaper articles and sources I can cite, however I am new to Wiki so pardon my lack of speed and dexterity in such editing matters. Let me know what are the specific points I can address or show cause for and I will accordingly comply to the best of my abilities. Best.Ggnmst (talk) 07:24, 21 June 2016 (UTC)GGNMST

Replied on user talk page Jimfbleak - talk to me? 12:52, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

RDX Inc

I have been trying to recreate a page after it had been removed. The page is just an introduction about a sports manufacturing company. However my efforts have been in vein as the administrators are not allowing. It is requested that the page be allowed to publish as it has no promotion material inside. If I’m doing anything wrong please help me fix that problem. It will be highly appreciated. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Davidboom (talk • contribs) 11:46, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

Replied on user talk page Jimfbleak - talk to me? 12:52, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

Your points have been duly noted. I will provide authentic sources that can confirm all facts and figures related to the brand with all the other details that you have mentioned and would rewrite the article in an un-advertising tone. Here, I would mention that I am in no way employed or hired by the brand. I am a combat sports enthusiast and blogger, I have recently decided to write about fighting brands that are underrated but provide great quality for money. And this is my first attempt, hence the mistakes. Rest assured I will rectify the mistakes and submit a much more thoroughly researched article with verifiable sources. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Davidboom (talk • contribs) 07:54, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Davidboom, you can sign your comments automatically using four tildes ~~~~. I suggest that you write in a sandbox or as a draft to start with, rather than posting directly as an article. when you do so, avoid opinions and loaded language such as underrated but provide great quality for money Jimfbleak - talk to me? 13:12, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Yesjulz

Hello I am farily new to wikipedia but if you're proposing a deletion of a page made just days ago before i even have a chance to upload my citation, You my friend are a hater. I put it up there so people couldelp me with my favorite influencer as there are probably aspects that I am missing but the world needs to know about her nonetheless. Lituation (talk) 15:38, 21 June 2016 (UTC) lit.

Lituation, please try to be civil. This is not social media, you can't just write what you like. You must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that she meets the notability guidelines. It is now Wikipedia policy that biographical articles about living people must have independent verifiable references, as defined in the link, or they will be deleted. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to her, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what she claims or interviewing her. You gave no references of any kind, and there is nothing at all to suggest that she meets our notability criteria.

it was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic but yours was a string of fact-free puffery, eg one of the most popular personalities in Miami’s social culture. She has pixy dusted the city by producing outrageous events and utilizing some of the top talent from today’s pop culture... This young, bright and energetic woman will continue to make her mark and soon be utilized in all facets of human interaction... world needs to know about her... — and much more in a similar vein.

If you post directly to article space, your article will be accessed as it stands, although what you wrote might well have been deleted even as a draft. I hope this helps Jimfbleak - talk to me? 15:58, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

If that was the case why not send a message and request that it be changed versus deleting what took forever to write. Lituation (talk) 16:03, 21 June 2016 (UTC)lit

Lituation, speedy deletion is used when an article is so obviously unacceptable, there is nothing to discuss. Unsourced spam for a non-notable person is not suitable for a Wikipedia article. If you really think she meets the linked criteria and can find references as described above, you can always try writing a draft version in a neutral factual tone. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 16:13, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

PC + semi

Please either remove pending changes or semiprot from Kirby: Planet Robobot. In its current configuration, semiprot allows autoconfirmed editors to edit/move, but you added pending changes to it, which means that edits by users who are autoconfirmed are automatically accepted. Which means that all edits to the article will be accepted, and pending changes is not exactly doing its job. Thanks. Sorry if I was a bit abrupt there, didn't mean to come across that way if I did. Thanks for all your help :) — Andy W. (talk · ctb) 05:28, 22 June 2016 (UTC) 05:42, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

No problem,  Andy W., my intention was to just stop unregsitered and new editors from editing or moving, but leave auto confirmed to continue. Anyway, I've now unprotected since it's been in place about two weeks Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

The Holy Rose

Please undelete if possible. You deleted it before I could remove the dbspam csd template. Thanks. Xender Lourdes (talk) 06:02, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Xender Lourdes, I'll restore as requested and revdel the original version. As it stands it still seems to promoting a particular variety of rose, could probably do with at least a link to the species. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:13, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh if you think so then drop it. It was tagged earlier as it was promoting some store called Holy Rose or something like that. I had changed it to the genus. I don't mind either way. Xender Lourdes (talk) 06:14, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Xender Lourdes, I'm not convinced that the Latinised version is a binomial name, looks like just an alternative name (I could be wrong). Five references for one sentence is overkill. Two (at most) is adequate Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:25, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Xender Lourdes, book and journal refs should have the relevant page numbers Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:27, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

• I'm actually saving the citations for expanding the article (and the citations properly) in the coming time. But look, I'll absolutely go by your call. Please delete it asap or not at all :) It will save my time editing if it eventually is going to be deleted. Xender Lourdes (talk) 06:28, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

• Xender Lourdes, I won't delete it now the original version is buried, but if you are still working on it, you could consider moving it to Draft:Holy Rose until it's ready for article space. Your call Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:38, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

• Done. I've moved the article to my user space. Please delete the main space article if you can. Thank. Xender Lourdes (talk) 06:47, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

K. T. Rama Rao page

Please undelete it. I will try to remove the ad/promotion kind of sections and watch it for any violations. --Rahmanuddin Shaik (talk) 13:07, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

I have started editing the page with more reliable sources and removing superlative words. Please help me if I do nay mistake in this article. Can the earlier redirects be placed back? --Rahmanuddin Shaik (talk) 14:04, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Rahmanuddin Shaik, I made these minor edits, looks OK to me. I don't know what redirects you mean, I think a bot deletes redirects to a deleted article, but there is nothing to stop you creating any you think are appropriate Jimfbleak - talk to me? 14:21, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Page Creation

TayrenB (talk) 22:10, 26 June 2016 (UTC)Tayren Nicole Ben-Abraham page

Sources were on the way to being provided. Please undelete it. If you look in the petitions for deletion, there are many sources provided there. This was a late night work posted in tribute to the composer, yet I did not have time to place all of the sources within it. Noting where the petitions originated from the chance of fair posting could have been met. I am a writer in America and I do have to sleep. Please undelete these and I shall put in all of the references. I shall also ask for help in making the edits. Thank you.

Hello, I would like to create a page for DJ Telly Tellz. As you may see the page has a lock on it and only admins may create the page due to previous issues. I was wondering if you may unlock the page or create the page fore me. Here are the link(s) to the information that I was going to use while creating the page.

Link: http://www.famousbirthdays.com/people/dj-telly-tellz.html — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bettywap (talk • contribs) 02:05, 25 June 2016 (UTC)

Bettywap you can sign your comments automatically using four tildes ~~~~. (ping DoctorWho42, RHaworth), Given the troubled history of this page, you should create it initially as a draft or in a user sandbox, and then ask for it to be reviewed with a view to the protection being removed to allow recreation.

You will need to provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that he meets the notability guidelines. It is now Wikipedia policy that biographical articles about living people must have independent verifiable references, as defined in the link, or they will be deleted. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to him, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what he claims or interviewing his management.

You will need more than one source, but in any case the Famous Birthdays site is not acceptable. Although it is transparent about who runs it, they give no sources for their info, and it looks as if anyone can suggest changes or additions without any requirement for verification.

There is nothing factual in the profile to suggest notability such as sales figures, major charting or awards (anyone can publish on Soundcloud), and the tone is promotional eg Production prodigy...has risen to fame...

I hope this helps Jimfbleak - talk to me? 05:57, 25 June 2016 (UTC)

Page Creation

Hi Jim,

I've modified my talk page and clearly mentioned the affiliations required. Now please suggest the next step to be able to create Wikipedia page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abhaygoldvip (talk • contribs) 12:31, 25 June 2016 (UTC)

Abhaygoldvip, thanks for the declaration. I've replied on your talk page Jimfbleak - talk to me? 12:38, 25 June 2016 (UTC)

BMCS

HI Jim

I was sorry to see that you deleted the BMCS article that i created due to lack of taxonomy, full article on Business Model Classification and promotion. I understood from the prior reviewer that i had 7 days to make the necessary changes, and was only notified on the issues on Friday and was working this weekend to make the requested changes.

Can you help me recreate the page within the guidelines of Wikipedia? I think this is useful information given that todays leading business model taxonomy is called - Global Industry Classification Standard (aka GICS) and Harvard and Wharton have teamed up to create a secondary system in a world where digital platforms and networks like Uber, Airbnb and Wikipedia exist and yet these business models are not properly categorized by GICS.

I would really appreciate you help.

Best regards,

Barry

Barrylibert (talk) 20:05, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Replied on user talk page Jimfbleak - talk to me? 05:19, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Euro Atlantic Society

Hi, Thank you for your feedback on the Euro Atlantic Society page. I am sorry to hear that the draft was deleted under a G11 violation. I am new at making Wikipedia pages therefore I am confused as to why, specifically, the page was rejected. I was wondering if it would be possible to retrieve the draft of my page in order to further edit it so as to make it Wikipedia appropriate. In addition, any advice/tips you may have on where I went wrong would be greatly appreciated. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Best,Legrandc (talk) 13:43, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Replied on user talk page Jimfbleak - talk to me? 05:19, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Recreation of one you just speedied

Hi Jim, I saw you deleted Ashen Miguel‎ right before I speedied it, I posted an Autobio warning on his user page but he's reposted it. Thought I'd give you heads up. JamesG5 (talk) 07:28, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks JamesG5, another admin's already nailed it Jimfbleak - talk to me? 13:50, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Deletion of "Huebsch Services" page

Hello Jimfbleak, you deleted the page "Draft:Huebsch Services", saying it was done under "G11 unambiguous advertising or promotion". We didn't finish editing the content and the citation before it was deleted. Would it be possible if you could provide any advice to meet the Wikipedia guidelines? We would be appreciated if you could tell us what we to do in a different and better way.Huebschweb (talk) 08:25, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Replied on talk page and blocked username violation Jimfbleak - talk to me? 14:07, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Deletion of "Mykola Yakovyna" page

Hello Jimfbleak, you deleted the page "Mykola Yakovyna", saying it was done under "G11 unambiguous advertising or promotion".

Mykola Yakovyna - known Ukrainian state and public figure, artist, architect; Member of the National Union of Artists of Ukraine; President of the Ukrainian National Committee of International Council on Monuments and Sites (ICOMOS). An article about him since 2007 available in Ukrainian Wikipedia. Can you restore the latest version of the article "Mykola Yakovyna" and tell me what can I do to article remained in the English wiki. --Jbuket (talk) 09:01, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Replied on user talk page Jimfbleak - talk to me? 16:38, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Reply

Hi Jim,

I'm really thankful for your help. I've updated the Crownit page as per the explanations you've given and cited the sources as well.

It would be great if you can have a look and feel free to suggest if there is anything else You want me to change before this page goes live.

Please find the draft page here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Crownit — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abhaygoldvip (talk • contribs) 13:16, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Replied on user talk page Jimfbleak - talk to me? 16:38, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Deletion-

Hi Jim- as many people have reported similar issues...newbie here. My page about Children's Growth Awareness was deleted (section 11). I was advised to notify you that I will be attempting a rewrite and trying to stay within the guidelines I have been studying. Thank you for your patience. JamieHarvey1989 (talk) 15:08, 30 June 2016 (UTC)