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POV Changes in ceremony information

I have removed or adjusted the most glaring POV errors in the Ceremony Information section, which seemed to have been entirely copied and pasted from an advertisement. This involved essentially massacring the section, and given lack of actual relevant information I would recommend that it is either updated by someone with more knowledge of the event than me, or simple removed and keep the article restricted to the tables.

I would welcome anybody to review the changes I made.

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+== POV Changes in ceremony information ==
+I have removed or adjusted the most glaring POV errors in the Ceremony Information section, which seemed to have been entirely copied and pasted from an advertisement. This involved essentially massacring the section, and given lack of actual relevant information I would recommend that it is either updated by someone with more knowledge of the event than me, or simple removed and keep the article restricted to the tables.
+I would welcome anybody to review the changes I made.