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I work for John Heilemann. His current title for NBC News and MSNBC is "National Affairs Analyst, NBC News and MSNBC." He is also no longer at New York Magazine. I propose we change the first sentence of his page to: "John Arthur Heilemann (born January 23, 1966) is an American journalist and National Affairs Analyst for NBC News and MSNBC, where he mainly covers US politics.^[1] TJDNYC (talk) 17:51, 29 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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 I work for John Heilemann. His current title for NBC News and MSNBC is "National Affairs Analyst, NBC News and MSNBC." He is also no longer at New York Magazine. I propose we change the first sentence of his page to: "John Arthur Heilemann (born January 23, 1966) is an American journalist and National Affairs Analyst for NBC News and MSNBC, where he mainly covers US politics.<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.politico.com/story/2017/05/30/playbook-juice-may-30-238928}}</ref>
 [[User:TJDNYC|TJDNYC]] ([[User talk:TJDNYC|talk]]) 17:51, 29 September 2017 (UTC)