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Requesting updates

Hello! As the official Walmart representative on Wikipedia, I have possible updates for this article. Like my colleague before me, I am limiting myself to Talk pages because of my conflict of interest. I ask editors to consider the following:

Introduction/infobox

The article says Judith McKenna was born in 1966/1967. According to BBC Radio 4, McKenna was born in 1966 in Middlesbrough.^[1] Can editors update the infobox and introduction with this information?

Career

This sentence says Judith McKenna was promoted, but it does not identify her previous role as Asda's CFO: "McKenna was promoted to chief operating officer (COO) of Asda in July 2011." I propose rewriting that sentence:
- McKenna served as chief financial officer at Asda before being promoted to chief operating officer (COO) in July 2011.^[2]^[3]
Can editors fix the typo in the last sentence of Career? "Thast" should be "that".

I will have more updates later, but this is a start. If there are questions, we can discuss here. Thanks, Elizabeth at Walmart (talk) 20:30, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ "Judith McKenna". BBC Radio 4. Retrieved 15 November 2018.
^ "Judith McKenna: The MT Interview". Retrieved 5 June 2018.
^ Wood, Zoe (15 November 2008). "How Asda takes sting out of the crunch". The Guardian. Retrieved 15 November 2018.

Answered by User:Michael Bednarek. Thank you for reviewing and implementing this request! Elizabeth at Walmart (talk) 22:15, 12 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

[BBCRadio4-1] "Judith McKenna". BBC Radio 4. Retrieved 15 November 2018.

[managementtoday.co.uk-2] "Judith McKenna: The MT Interview". Retrieved 5 June 2018.

[GuardianWood-3] Wood, Zoe (15 November 2008). "How Asda takes sting out of the crunch". The Guardian. Retrieved 15 November 2018.

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 I will have more updates later, but this is a start. If there are questions, we can discuss here. Thanks, [[User:Elizabeth at Walmart|Elizabeth at Walmart]] ([[User talk:Elizabeth at Walmart|talk]]) 20:30, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
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+:Answered by [[User:Michael Bednarek]]. Thank you for reviewing and implementing this request! [[User:Elizabeth at Walmart|Elizabeth at Walmart]] ([[User talk:Elizabeth at Walmart|talk]]) 22:15, 12 December 2018 (UTC)