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I suggest perhaps it be changed to Russia, or further defined into the former Soviet Union countries that are now independent, accordingly. |
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Assessment comments
The article seems to be in reasonably good shape and well-structured, although for my taste more prose and less lists would be better, especially for the History section (there must be more that can be said than two short paragraphs!). Other stuff that needs to be done is a decent copyediting by a native speaker (still sounds a bit like translated from German) and some inline citations per WP:CITE for at least the major dates and numbers to make it easy for a reader to immediately cross-check and verify them directly from the sources. Lone years should not be linked (I think that's in WP:MOSDATE), and some numbers need to be converted to English style. Can the "online almanach" be linked or is it no longer online? Kusma (talk) 09:22, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
Thank you!--Gabriel-Royce (talk) 14:05, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
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Significant Minorities - Soviet Union? In 2018?
Significant Minorities - Soviet Union? In 2018?
I suggest perhaps it be changed to Russia, or further defined into the former Soviet Union countries that are now independent, accordingly.