User contributions for 24.62.126.170

25 March 2010

• 07:1607:16, 25 March 2010 diff hist −201‎ The Sadist (film) ‎ →‎Character Synopsis: 'Murder' is a legal term, and whats with all the "actor" and "actress" references? It borders on being comical.
• 07:0207:02, 25 March 2010 diff hist −28‎ The Sadist (film) ‎ →‎Character Synopsis: Factual, but innapropriately peacock like decriptors for the actor. Un-needed, and irrelevant in the apecific context.
• 05:1905:19, 25 March 2010 diff hist +87‎ John Holmes (actor) ‎ →‎Early life: Adding citation.
• 04:5104:51, 25 March 2010 diff hist 0‎ Eddie Nash ‎ →‎Wonderland murders: Updating-information is still current.

24 March 2010

• 07:2007:20, 24 March 2010 diff hist +205‎ Wikipedia:Conflict of interest/Noticeboard ‎No edit summary
• 07:0807:08, 24 March 2010 diff hist +225‎ User talk:Roadrunnerkmh ‎No edit summary
• 07:0507:05, 24 March 2010 diff hist +12‎ David Gergen ‎ →‎Educational, journalistic and other professional activities: Tense wrong, and "best selling author" is not a title used in employment. Poor writing revised for clarity.
• 07:0107:01, 24 March 2010 diff hist +4‎ George Stephanopoulos ‎ Undid revision 351729919 by 24.62.126.170 (talk)
• 07:0007:00, 24 March 2010 diff hist −4‎ George Stephanopoulos ‎ →‎Early life and education: Deleting word that caused the meaning of the sentence to be nonsensical (He agreed to attend law school if NOT offered the scholarship (!!??)

23 March 2010

• 06:0806:08, 23 March 2010 diff hist −29‎ The Incredible Hulk (film) ‎ →‎Plot: Bracketed, not capitalized, abrupt, comments that lack specificity, are not elaborated upon, and possibly confusing.
• 02:5302:53, 23 March 2010 diff hist +4‎ Day of the Dead (1985 film) ‎ Grammar

22 March 2010

• 21:0321:03, 22 March 2010 diff hist −82‎ It's a Wonderful Life ‎ →‎Colorization: Unsourced information. Cited source was a dead link.

21 March 2010

• 07:5507:55, 21 March 2010 diff hist +171‎ Talk:Thomas DeSimone ‎ →‎Disappearance
• 07:5107:51, 21 March 2010 diff hist −269‎ Thomas DeSimone ‎ →‎Gangland slayings: Desimone aged 12 at the time was not involved in this crime (in 1963). Writer is mixing up Goodfellas movie fiction with reality.
• 07:4407:44, 21 March 2010 diff hist +44‎ Thomas DeSimone ‎ Adding category American murderers of children. Desimone murdered Michael 'Spider' Gianco aged 15.
• 07:4207:42, 21 March 2010 diff hist +90‎ N User talk:74.197.73.217 ‎ ←Created page with 'Your edit on Tommy DeSimone constitutes vandalism, please refrain from this in the future.'
• 07:3607:36, 21 March 2010 diff hist −126‎ Thomas DeSimone ‎ →‎Association with Vario and Burke: Repeats Goodfellas movie fiction as fact. Hill was seven years older than DeSimone, and there is no indication they were actually "friends".
• 07:2307:23, 21 March 2010 diff hist −59‎ Frank DeSimone ‎ Sentence states DeSimone was born in Los Angeles, while the very next paragraph states he was born in Pueblo, Colorado, and includes a citation of this. Jarring error removed.

19 March 2010

• 07:5807:58, 19 March 2010 diff hist −3,095‎ Robert Walker (actor, born 1940) ‎ Removing block quoted paragraphs that were cut and pasted from IMDB, against Wikipedia policy. Possibly self-promoting mention of author's name as well. Violation of Wiki policy, inappropriate.
• 07:0407:04, 19 March 2010 diff hist −26‎ One Touch of Venus (film) ‎ Deleting highly opinionary comment regarding why film received poor reviews. Innapropriate, Un-encyclopedic, blog-like conclusion.
• 06:4206:42, 19 March 2010 diff hist −111‎ Cover Girl (film) ‎ →‎Legacy: The character had the same name, and was played by Kelly, but there is no evidence that this is the same character, The films are un-related. Tag: section blanking
• 06:4006:40, 19 March 2010 diff hist −282‎ Xanadu (film) ‎ Film unrelated to 'Down to Earth' at all, nor is it a sequel to 'Cover Girl'. Gene Kelly's character happens to have the same names as his character in 'Cover Girl''. Un-sourced, speculative opinion
• 06:3806:38, 19 March 2010 diff hist +282‎ Xanadu (film) ‎ Undid revision 350744820 by 24.62.126.170 (talk)
• 06:3706:37, 19 March 2010 diff hist −282‎ Xanadu (film) ‎ The film has no relation to Xanadu at all, nor is it a sequel to 'Cover Girl'. Gene Kelly's character happens to have the same names as his character in 'Cover Girl''. Un-sourced, speculative opinion
• 06:3306:33, 19 March 2010 diff hist −4‎ Down to Earth (1947 film) ‎ Minor edit-redundant word ('now').
• 06:3206:32, 19 March 2010 diff hist +38‎ Down to Earth (1947 film) ‎ Adding specificity to sentence.
• 06:2906:29, 19 March 2010 diff hist −69‎ Down to Earth (1947 film) ‎ →‎Remakes: Xanadu was not a sequel to this film, nor was it a remake. The two films do have similar plots, but are un-related.

18 March 2010

• 20:0220:02, 18 March 2010 diff hist +59‎ Mad Men ‎ →‎Lead characters: Adding citation.
• 20:0020:00, 18 March 2010 diff hist +3‎ Mad Men ‎ →‎Lead characters: His proper name is 'Richard', 'Dick' is a nickname.

15 March 2010

• 08:3408:34, 15 March 2010 diff hist −72‎ Woomera Immigration Reception and Processing Centre ‎ →‎The Woomera Breakout: Deleting comment referencing "rumors", un-cited, speaculation.

12 March 2010

• 23:1023:10, 12 March 2010 diff hist +1‎ Omar Sharif ‎ Corrected spelling.

10 March 2010

• 01:3301:33, 10 March 2010 diff hist −9‎ Ashleigh Banfield ‎ 'Caucasian' is a racial classifcation, not an ethnicity.

7 March 2010

• 08:5108:51, 7 March 2010 diff hist +20‎ George A. Romero ‎ Vauge, possibly, opinionary, hard to prove/disprove claim.

6 March 2010

• 09:2309:23, 6 March 2010 diff hist −48‎ Maniac (1934 film) ‎ Removing opinionary, innapropriate blurb from photo caption "perhaps better suited for Bela Lugosi". Un-encyclopedic.

5 March 2010

• 11:4611:46, 5 March 2010 diff hist −4‎ Guyana Tragedy: The Story of Jim Jones ‎ →‎Production: A third billed role is certainly not a "cameo" .

2 March 2010

• 09:5009:50, 2 March 2010 diff hist −128‎ Romper Stomper ‎ →‎Plot: Removing bizzare tangent in parantheses. Commentary almost totally off topic, and the sentence was oddly phrased.

1 March 2010

• 09:4709:47, 1 March 2010 diff hist −4‎ Dave Evans (singer) ‎ →‎AC/DC: minor edit/correction
• 09:4609:46, 1 March 2010 diff hist −2‎ Dave Evans (singer) ‎ →‎AC/DC: Clarifying convoluted sentence. Grammar.
• 08:5908:59, 1 March 2010 diff hist −7‎ Marty Ingels ‎ There is no evidencew, referenced or otherwise, that Ingels is German citizen.
• 08:4408:44, 1 March 2010 diff hist +1‎ Kay Parker ‎ →‎Taboo fame: Improper tense useage.
• 08:4108:41, 1 March 2010 diff hist +4‎ Taboo (film series) ‎ →‎Taboo 2 (1982): Re-writing disjointed sentence for grammar, flow including re-writing a sentence fragment that rendered the sentence non-sensical.
• 08:3808:38, 1 March 2010 diff hist +6‎ Taboo (film series) ‎ →‎Taboo 2 (1982): Re-writing sentence for flow, after original modification.
• 08:3708:37, 1 March 2010 diff hist −7‎ Taboo (film series) ‎ →‎Taboo 2 (1982): It is not a "pseudo sequel". Characters from the first film return, and incidents from that film are referenced.
• 08:1908:19, 1 March 2010 diff hist +6‎ Presidential dollar coins ‎ →‎Coin details: Clinton was not sworn in as "Bill", nor is that his legsl name.
• 04:5404:54, 1 March 2010 diff hist −136‎ Suzi Quatro ‎ Quatro is not a British subject. She is an American citizen residing in the U.K.
• 04:4304:43, 1 March 2010 diff hist +408‎ Talk:AC/DC ‎ →‎8 out of 10 current and former members are of British origin
• 04:2804:28, 1 March 2010 diff hist +273‎ Talk:AC/DC ‎ →‎Nationality confusion... Again!

27 February 2010

• 20:5120:51, 27 February 2010 diff hist −97‎ Ella Mae Morse ‎ Cites source that is essentially a review. Comments are opinionary in nature, lavishing praise and a viewpoint. Un-encyclopedic, Innapropriate.
• 20:4720:47, 27 February 2010 diff hist −64‎ Ella Mae Morse ‎ Removing opinionary, innapropriate comments ("most talented and overlooked") Review like, un-encyclopedic.
• 07:2307:23, 27 February 2010 diff hist 0‎ Cliff Williams ‎ He has been active in musical groups since 1970, not 1974. The article states this.