User contributions for 83.254.154.164

29 April 2015

• 08:1308:13, 29 April 2015 diff hist +282 Talk:Mama Told Me Not to Come →Once and for all, it's "strait-laced"!

20 April 2015

• 20:5420:54, 20 April 2015 diff hist +130 Yessongs more accurate about Bruford - it's a bit finicky, but the tracks with him on Yessongs were neither the last ones recorded with him in 70s, CTTE is later, nor the last ones released on an album - America, on Yesterdays, was his final recording with them

12 April 2015

• 06:5606:56, 12 April 2015 diff hist +2 Talk:Pliocene →Explanation of boundaries in lead section: m
• 06:5306:53, 12 April 2015 diff hist +18 Talk:Pliocene →Explanation of boundaries in lead section: m
• 06:5206:52, 12 April 2015 diff hist +1 Talk:Pliocene →Explanation of boundaries in lead section: m
• 06:5106:51, 12 April 2015 diff hist +1 Talk:Pliocene →Explanation of boundaries in lead section: m
• 06:4806:48, 12 April 2015 diff hist +609 User talk:Vsmith →Pliocene boundaries: new section
• 06:3906:39, 12 April 2015 diff hist +15 Talk:Pliocene clearer break between the table image and the new section
• 06:3506:35, 12 April 2015 diff hist +2,861 Talk:Pliocene →Explanation of boundaries in lead section: new section
• 05:5605:56, 12 April 2015 diff hist −3 Pliocene Undid revision 654229694 by Vsmith (talk) the Pliocene lies in between those two, therefore "boundaries between the warmer Miocene and the relatively cooler Pleistocene" makes no sense. Go figure.

11 April 2015

• 20:0620:06, 11 April 2015 diff hist +993 Talk:Charlotte Martin →Another CM -> possible disamb link: new section

8 April 2015

• 22:2422:24, 8 April 2015 diff hist +440 Talk:Isthmus of Panama →Incorrect
• 14:5314:53, 8 April 2015 diff hist +560 Talk:Fanny Bullock Workman →First woman to give lectures at the Sorbonne?: new section

7 April 2015

• 14:2614:26, 7 April 2015 diff hist +332 Talk:Sarah Palin →What is going on?

3 April 2015

• 18:3418:34, 3 April 2015 diff hist +443 Talk:Equus (genus) →is the Temporal Range still right?
• 18:2218:22, 3 April 2015 diff hist −2 Gated reverb →History: Collins, but he only played on a few tracks on the PG album
• 17:5517:55, 3 April 2015 diff hist +109 Gated reverb →History: more precise terms on Collins/Gabriel/Padgham. The drum production on Low is not the same kind of technique, see talk page

31 March 2015

• 02:1302:13, 31 March 2015 diff hist +613 Talk:Chrissie Hynde →Hynde, Mothersbaugh, Tin Soldiers, and Nixon... (Kent State): yes, they were there

30 March 2015

• 16:1816:18, 30 March 2015 diff hist 0 Thin Line Between Love and Hate →Cover versions: better word order
• 13:1813:18, 30 March 2015 diff hist +8 Thin Line Between Love and Hate →Cover versions: m
• 13:1513:15, 30 March 2015 diff hist 0 Thin Line Between Love and Hate →Cover versions: m
• 13:1413:14, 30 March 2015 diff hist +893 Thin Line Between Love and Hate →Cover versions: shift in point of view and story in the Pretenders version
• 06:2106:21, 30 March 2015 diff hist −3 Pliocene correction, not duplic. of Pleistocene here
• 04:2204:22, 30 March 2015 diff hist +19 Granite →Occurrence: language clarified
• 02:4902:49, 30 March 2015 diff hist 0 Talk:Amanda Knox →Defamation: fixed acronym slip

29 March 2015

• 13:5513:55, 29 March 2015 diff hist +174 Scott of the Antarctic (film) filming locations; this needed sourcing. Antarctica as a filming location is out of the question, some stock footage from earlier expeditions may have been used, see IMDB.
• 11:0011:00, 29 March 2015 diff hist +96 Talk:Amanda Knox →Defamation: minor copyedit
• 04:4804:48, 29 March 2015 diff hist +2,251 Talk:Amanda Knox →Defamation: you don't see the soapboxers coming over the hill?

28 March 2015

• 21:4521:45, 28 March 2015 diff hist +1 Talk:Amanda Knox →Time to change the lede: better word
• 21:3021:30, 28 March 2015 diff hist +1,488 Talk:Amanda Knox →Time to change the lede
• 21:0421:04, 28 March 2015 diff hist +89 Talk:Amanda Knox →Defamation: for clarity of reference
• 16:0716:07, 28 March 2015 diff hist 0 Talk:Amanda Knox →Defamation: m
• 15:5515:55, 28 March 2015 diff hist +11 Talk:Amanda Knox →Defamation: m
• 15:5215:52, 28 March 2015 diff hist +2,077 Talk:Amanda Knox →Defamation: the divisiveness of the affair
• 03:4103:41, 28 March 2015 diff hist +34 Talk:Amanda Knox →Time to change the lede: m
• 03:0803:08, 28 March 2015 diff hist +1,576 Talk:Amanda Knox →Time to change the lede: weasel wording

27 March 2015

• 18:5318:53, 27 March 2015 diff hist +8 Talk:Amanda Knox →Reason for controversy: m
• 18:5118:51, 27 March 2015 diff hist +944 Talk:Amanda Knox →Reason for controversy

26 March 2015

• 16:3816:38, 26 March 2015 diff hist +105 Horsehead Nebula →Overview: copyedit on Orion and the interstellar medium, improving some rather flimsy English
• 01:1201:12, 26 March 2015 diff hist +1 Talk:The Great Dictator →"The first important satire" in cinema?: m

25 March 2015

• 10:4510:45, 25 March 2015 diff hist +110 Talk:The Great Dictator →"The first important satire" in cinema?: coopyedit
• 10:3710:37, 25 March 2015 diff hist +1 Talk:The Great Dictator →"The first important satire" in cinema?: m
• 10:3610:36, 25 March 2015 diff hist +702 Talk:The Great Dictator →"The first important satire" in cinema?: new section

24 March 2015

• 06:5306:53, 24 March 2015 diff hist +20 Panthera →Evolution: copyedit: the words "emergence of the genus" are misleading and make it harder to understand. The date 2-3.8 mya relates to oldest known fossils, not to when the genus may have begun

21 March 2015

• 13:2013:20, 21 March 2015 diff hist −12 Wheat →Origin: rm vandalism - Iran was clearly not within the area where wheat cultivation began, and the text says "southern Levant"

19 March 2015

• 16:5116:51, 19 March 2015 diff hist +877 Talk:Solar eclipse →Safety Issues: hype or fact?
• 06:4506:45, 19 March 2015 diff hist −211 You Love Us →Live performances: they were not the first western rock band in Cuba in any case, several European rock acts had performed there many years before. e.g. Mano Negra and possibly Santana

12 March 2015

• 23:3023:30, 12 March 2015 diff hist +815 Talk:Purple Rain (album) →Remaster/Reissue?: new section

7 March 2015

• 17:3617:36, 7 March 2015 diff hist −459 Talk:Babylon →Ishtar Gate in Berlin is not a reproduction - it is a reconstruction: m retract
• 17:3317:33, 7 March 2015 diff hist +459 Talk:Babylon →Ishtar Gate in Berlin is not a reproduction - it is a reconstruction