User contributions for Dayirmiter
A user with 2,061 edits. Account created on 11 July 2006.
10 September 2023
- 14:5914:59, 10 September 2023 diff hist −23 Donn (given name) Corrected two typos and removed unneeded words. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:5214:52, 10 September 2023 diff hist −8 Epithet Removed an, in the context, confusing use of the word "euphemism" and provided a temporal anchor for the quotation from Fowler. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:4314:43, 10 September 2023 diff hist −82 Epithet Removed from the lead an unsourced and unclear use of the word "title" that was nowhere else mentioned in the article, and improved the grouping of epithet examples. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:2514:25, 10 September 2023 diff hist −80 Epithet Removed from the lead an unsourced assertion about "shades of meaning" that is nowhere further explicated in the article body. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1614:16, 10 September 2023 diff hist −41 Epithet Improved awkward phraseology. Tag: Visual edit
- 13:5913:59, 10 September 2023 diff hist 0 Linguistic prescription Improved a wikilink. Tag: Visual edit
- 13:5013:50, 10 September 2023 diff hist +4 The Hill (newspaper) →Features and editions: Added a wikilink. Tag: Visual edit
7 September 2023
- 08:3708:37, 7 September 2023 diff hist +2 Dreams from My Real Father Corrected possessives per mos:poss. Tag: Visual edit
4 September 2023
- 14:2114:21, 4 September 2023 diff hist −103 Kellie-Jay Keen-Minshull Improved neutrality of lead. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 06:4806:48, 4 September 2023 diff hist −116 Terminology of homosexuality Focused photo caption on its relevance to this article and eliminated editorial interpretation. Tag: Visual edit
3 September 2023
- 20:3420:34, 3 September 2023 diff hist 0 Sex assignment Improved word order of one sentence. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3220:32, 3 September 2023 diff hist −19 Sex assignment Improved the logical arrangement of two sentences. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2720:27, 3 September 2023 diff hist +9 Sex assignment Improved word choice. Tag: Visual edit
1 September 2023
- 12:1312:13, 1 September 2023 diff hist +5 Out of the Silent Planet Regularized possessives per MOS:POSS. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
29 August 2023
- 02:0602:06, 29 August 2023 diff hist −23 OK →West African: Improved sentence structure. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:0302:03, 29 August 2023 diff hist +14 OK →West African: Provided, per source, the more accurate context of the quotation in which Richmond explains his actions. Tag: Visual edit
27 August 2023
- 17:2417:24, 27 August 2023 diff hist −2 State of Fear: The Truth about Terrorism Corrected misspellings. current Tag: Visual edit
- 17:1417:14, 27 August 2023 diff hist −62 State of Fear Improved neutrality of the lead. Tag: Visual edit
26 August 2023
- 03:5103:51, 26 August 2023 diff hist −113 Barack Obama Sr. →Final years and death: Deleted an invisible comment no longer relevant and noted need for a citation. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
25 August 2023
- 23:1223:12, 25 August 2023 diff hist −18 Quillette →History: Integrated two paragraphs dealing with the Politico article on Quillette and elided misrepresentations of what it said (the word "hoax" was not used, and the quotation "fan the flames", implied to be Lehmann's, was the Politico writer's formulation). Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4622:46, 25 August 2023 diff hist +42 Quillette →History: Corrected text per cited source and improved neutrality of presentation. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4519:45, 25 August 2023 diff hist 0 Quillette →History: Corrected text per cited source. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:2119:21, 25 August 2023 diff hist +42 Nature versus nurture Improved the opening sentence by replacing "determined fate" with "relative influence" and clarifying for this context the terms "genetics" and "environment". Tag: Visual edit
23 August 2023
- 22:3522:35, 23 August 2023 diff hist −6 Wendell Berry →Fiction: Improved the structure, wording, and/or punctuation of several sentences. Tag: Visual edit
21 August 2023
- 05:5305:53, 21 August 2023 diff hist −42 Walter Russell →The Russell Cosmogony: Improved a sentence and removed a template complaining of primary sources, which are appropriate for explicating Russell's theories and establishing his publishing history. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 05:3205:32, 21 August 2023 diff hist −31 Walter Russell →The Russell Cosmogony: Improved structure and clarity of several sentences, largely by leaving out unnecessary and distracting words. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:1305:13, 21 August 2023 diff hist −49 Walter Russell →The Russell Cosmogony: Made a sentence more concise and more neutral. Tag: Visual edit
17 August 2023
- 06:5106:51, 17 August 2023 diff hist +1 Bart D. Ehrman Regularized the tense of a sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
14 August 2023
- 17:2117:21, 14 August 2023 diff hist +68 Broken (2005 film) Drew text closer to cited sources, improved sentence structure, improved a citation by moving its definition outside of the infobox template. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 16:3216:32, 14 August 2023 diff hist +44 Broken (2005 film) →External links: Replaced usurped URL with link to an archived copy. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
12 August 2023
- 09:3909:39, 12 August 2023 diff hist −93 Maya Soetoro-Ng →Early life and education: Moved a quotation out of Wikipedia's voice and into that of the source, and reduced the non-encyclopedic fluff. Tag: Visual edit
- 06:1606:16, 12 August 2023 diff hist +154 Rising Star (book) →Reception: Though dubious this material belongs in the "Reception" section, replaced editorial interpretation ("false consciousness") and misrepresentation ("among the African American community") with a fuller quotation. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:5705:57, 12 August 2023 diff hist +10 Rising Star (book) →Reception: Improved the wording of a sentence, particularly in correcting the suggestion that the book "includes" the mentioned essay. Tag: Visual edit
11 August 2023
- 06:5806:58, 11 August 2023 diff hist +9 Sinéad O'Connor →Personal life: Improved word choice and sentence structure. Tag: Visual edit
- 06:4006:40, 11 August 2023 diff hist −20 Sinéad O'Connor →Personal life: Removed a "following week" assertion that did not agree with the mentioned dates. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2805:28, 11 August 2023 diff hist −119 Tony Bennett →Illness and death: Deleted an assertion for which I found no confirmation in the cited sources. Tag: Visual edit
3 August 2023
- 20:1620:16, 3 August 2023 diff hist −2 Linguistic relativity →Johann Georg Hamann: Coordinated von Humboldt image with text. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1120:11, 3 August 2023 diff hist −1,331 Linguistic relativity →Emanuel Swedenborg: Deleted this section because I believe it misinterprets Swedenborg 180 degrees and, lacking any sourcing, constitutes an editor's opinion. Tag: Visual edit
2 August 2023
- 03:4103:41, 2 August 2023 diff hist +26 Hyperallergic →Reception: Drew text closer to the cited source, including a quotation. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3903:39, 2 August 2023 diff hist −4 Hyperallergic →Reception: Updated a verb tense. Tag: Visual edit
1 August 2023
- 21:3721:37, 1 August 2023 diff hist +411 A Rape on Campus →Media criticism: Deleted a citation of a source that does not contain the ascribed quotation and replaced it with one that does. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4519:45, 1 August 2023 diff hist −2 A Rape on Campus →Media criticism: Improved a malformed sentence and merged two short paragraphs into one. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4219:42, 1 August 2023 diff hist −348 A Rape on Campus Deleted from an overly long lead opinions found verbatim in the article body. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:2519:25, 1 August 2023 diff hist −114 A Rape on Campus Deleted an opinion couched in slang that some readers may not understand. The same source is quoted more substantially in the article body. Tag: Visual edit
30 July 2023
- 22:2422:24, 30 July 2023 diff hist −2 Mission Earth (novel series) Corrected possessive per MOS:POSS. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 22:1622:16, 30 July 2023 diff hist +11 Traditional medicine Temporal update of the lead. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 10:2510:25, 30 July 2023 diff hist −14 David Jolly Added a couple of details, omitted the losing opponent found in the article body, and improved a verb tense. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:1800:18, 30 July 2023 diff hist 0 Help:Citation Style 2 Replaced mistaken word "citation" with intended word "template". Tag: Visual edit
29 July 2023
- 21:1421:14, 29 July 2023 diff hist −1 HTML →Attributes: Corrected a typo. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 21:0521:05, 29 July 2023 diff hist +12 Help:VisualEditor →Editing links: Removed advice to place an unlabeled link "after a space". Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
