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Divico

I think that Divico should be included in "Commanders and leaders" because he was very important person in Battle of Bibracte and leader of one of main tribe took part in this war Helvetii. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sfaxx (talkcontribs) 00:53, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Orphaned references in Gallic Wars

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Gallic Wars's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "Hans Delbrück":

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT 07:18, 15 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source wanted...

...for the claim that C. became notably wealthy after defeating the Gauls. Macdonald-ross (talk) 15:30, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Found, in Gilliver. Through selling of slaves, and plundering cities. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n! 00:13, 14 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Gallic Wars/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 03:37, 15 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Opening statement

Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use  Done,  Fixed, plus Added,  Not done,  Doing..., or minus Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 03:37, 15 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This article is... massive, and this review will take a while. Expect me to read a couple sections at a time and to take frequent breaks. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 03:37, 15 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Vami IV, Thank you for this grand undertaking :) I totally understand it will take a while. Took me a while to write the thing! Been at it since last year. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n! 17:58, 15 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Vami IV, Will you still be able to tackle this? If not, totally fine, just lemme know so I can find another reviewer :) CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n! 20:16, 2 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am; I'm just waiting on my comments in #Refrencing to be addressed. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 22:14, 2 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Vami IV, Oooh, sorry, didn't realize you wanted each section to be addressed in turn, I haven't done it that way before CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n! 22:39, 2 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I don't, and I should have explained that. I just take referencing seriously, and like to gauge receptiveness to input with first sections. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 23:41, 2 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@CaptainEek: Captain, I must offer you my apologies, but I cannot continue this review. I have decided to temporarily pull back from Wikipedia for some soul-searching. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 12:28, 10 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Referencing

I'll start here. The referencing is reliable, but also a mess.

  • There are books and journal essays with long-form citations in #Notes that should be moved into #References.
  • The short-form in-line citations are not uniformly SFN or uniformly not SFN. Uniform SFN format is desirable unto requirement for an article this size.
  • There are broken SFNs in #Notes.
  • There are long-form citations under #References that do not have in-line citations leading to them.
  • There are missing ISBNs.

GA progress

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.