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Neutrality Regarding Denial of Communion

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Under the section "personal life," the last paragraph gives a one sided description of the events leading up to and the aftermath of Cervantes being denied communion by his priest the Bishop of Las Cruces. The source cited is an article in the National Catholic Register, but this source is not used appropriately. Rather, it appears that the wording as it exists on the page repeats the Diocese of Las Cruses's statements through a spokesperson as if they were neutral fact and with no in text attribution making it clear that that was the perspective of the diocese. The text on the page is also one sided, and gives no attention to Cervantes's public statements, even those included within the cited source. I recommend the last paragraph be rewritten in neutral tone and with appropriate in text attributions.

Arecaceæ2011 (talk) 12:08, 24 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]