Talk:William J. Evans (chemist)

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TA Comments:

In-text citations: yes, though the same citations are listed multiple times, review formatting to correct

Professional tone: yes

Paraphrasing real science: yes

Grammar and spelling: overall good

Links to other wiki articles: no

Score: 18/20

Peer Review:

Peer Review:

In my opinion, I like the way you split up the topic into three different sub-topics because it is very easy to follow. Your comparison of the quantum well laser to a grain of rice allows any reader to relate and thus gain a better understanding of the topic. For a reader who has no idea what a quantum dot is, I feel like a little further detail would help. For example, what exactly is a quantum dot? Reading this, I understand its size and function but would love to know more about what it is composed of.

PENDIALA BALASUBRAMANIAM, ANUSHRI Peer Review Score: 20/20