Talk:Battle of Musa Qala

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initial comments

also what's up with the map its just a a map outlining Afghan provinces, not where the battle was or anything relevant24.78.210.56 (talk) 10:51, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

can someone fix the damn infobox, its really messed up and i dont edit much so i dont know how to do it, thanks!

Raabbasi (talk) 09:35, 9 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

ISAF Commander

Ok, we have the Afghan National Army commander. But who's the ISAF commander? If any ISAF forces are participating, they are most certainly not under the command of an Afghan. If we don't know specifics, just put "Canadian Military Leadership" or whatever nation's forces are participating in there. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 142.179.73.188 (talk) 23:57, 9 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

There are five regional commands in Afghanistan, the one for the south is currently under the command of Major General J Page (UK) See:- ISAF Regional Commands. Richard Harvey (talk) 08:51, 11 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Surely there is a lower ranked commander responsible for ISAF forces taking part in this assault? Who was the ISAF field commander in this attack? If we know, it should be put down under leaders, if we don't know we should just put "Unknown ISAF Field Commander" or something down. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 142.179.73.188 (talk) 01:46, 19 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Figures

Where are we getting the Taliban fighting strength from? Marskell (talk) 12:23, 9 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Right here...http://www.guardian.co.uk/afghanistan/story/0,,2224731,00.html. "In what military commanders described as a defining battle for the stability of Helmand province, around 4,500 Nato soldiers and Afghan National Army troops launched a series of attacks against a 2,000-strong Taliban force entrenched in the town of Musa Qala." --SCJE (talk) 20:12, 9 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, we're fine. Marskell (talk) 20:18, 9 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Taliban sources quote 2,500 fighters on their end but the most reliable western sources say 2,000 taliban. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Raabbasi (talk • contribs) 22:08, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Casualties

There is confusion over the number of military casualties. With changes between British, NATO, and ISAF (International Security Assistance Force). Lets not confuse things, the military groups are split into three main groups, either Taliban, Afghan Army or ISAF The ISAF group covers all the Military units that are not Afghan. The ISAF is under the control of NATO (See:- [1]) For the latest breakdown of countries participating see this ISAF pdf file:- NATO ISAF Placements. Currently the ISAF only lists one soldier killed by a mine with another injured in the same explosion. Another story indicates A soldier killed in an explosion in southern Afghanistan, with two others injured. This may be a prior report relating to the same incident and as yet it is unclear if they are. See:- NATO/ISAF press release. Richard Harvey (talk) 08:51, 11 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Confirmation:- The second report of another British soldier killed and two injured in an explosion, was prior to the battle on the 4th November and refers to Territorial Army soldier Trooper Jack Sadler of the Honourable Artillery Company. BBC News Online 5 December Richard Harvey (talk) 12:01, 12 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Note that would be 4 December (or 5 December, according to the Scotsman)—just two or three days before the battle, in the area. I think it silly not to include it as a casualty here. Marskell (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Info box

In the info box in the upper right hand corner, the "Outcome" section of the battle is listed as "Coalition victory" yet insofar as it is labeled an ongoing event the battle is not yet finished. I assume it is merely an accidental prematurity. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 198.30.13.44 (talk) 14:30, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

BBC reported that the Afghans had taken the town with the assistance of NATO forces.

Also, only one British soldier has died, the second soldier was from another NATO country, not Britain. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 58.107.163.120 (talk) 23:30, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

For the record, the battle summaries placed at the top right of the page are called "info boxes"? I've always wondered about it but had no idea how to ask so I apologize if this isn't the proper place to ask. 67.149.243.229 (talk) 00:11, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Drug Dealers?

The growing of poppy was banned under Taliban rule and reemerged after their fall and it is grown by non taliban.Darth Anzeruthi (talk) 21:47, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

That statement needs to be cited (WP:CITE) to be accepted for the article. Parsival74 (talk) 23:01, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Indeed, it also needs to be put in context. The Taliban have subsequently emerged as major allies of the drug gangs. It is a large % of their current income. The Taliban ban should be seen for what it was, an OPEC like "opium shock" intended to improve the long term profitability of their own narcotics business. And yes, this opinion needs to be backed up with factual information too before inclusion in an article. TMLutas (talk) 17:30, 13 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Timeline

I personally find the bolded dates ugly. If we returned to ordinary prose, would it hurt in any way? Marskell (talk) 12:54, 12 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

In principle I agree, though at the present stage more details will start to unfold, now the actual combat has died down a little. So perhaps it will be better to have each day's event kept separate, to prevent to much rewriting of text in to allow the prose to flow as individual events are fitted in. I have just re-formated the section to use subheaders. Hopefully that is better on the eye, and will also prove more use when suitable images become available. Is that okay with you? Richard Harvey (talk) 15:40, 12 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Order of Battle

I think that an OrBat would greatly enhance this article.

Hal06 (talk) 16:00, 25 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Locator dot

The locator dot for Musa Qala on the main image seems to be missing. Currently, there is just a blank map of the provinces of Afghanistan. The Celestial City (talk) 00:18, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Cleanup

This article needs serious copyediting. I made a start, but there are lots of grammar, structure and citation issues throughout. This should have been caught during an FA review. 86.26.60.18 (talk) 02:24, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Furthermore, all references need to be rechecked for accuracy. I found two that were either synthesising, or saying things that simply were not in citations. 86.26.60.18 (talk) 02:35, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I hvae run out of time to edit this -- can this be withdrawn as an FA? Its just not there. 86.26.60.18 (talk) 02:42, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I should stop editing and go, but I keep finding problems. There is conflicting information about the Afghan forces leading the "final push", and later it says that british forces were leading the push to the bazaar -- which is it? 86.26.60.18 (talk) 02:50, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The attack into the town was by 3 Kandak (ANA) mentored by C company 2nd Battalion, Yorkshire Regiment OMLT (Operational mentoring Liason Team), under the command of Major Adams, supported by 2 Kandak (ANA) and B Company 2nd Battalion, Yorkshire Regiment under the command of Major Little. Each OMLT / Kandak unit consisted of 240 ANA fighting toops, 36 British and 12 US special forces soldiers. 3 Kandak was broken down into six platoons of ANA, with three British soldiers attached to each one and two US special forces in each of the first three assaulting platoons. The remaining British and US forces were in ground support vehicles IE: US HMWWV's and British WMIKS. The actual first soldier in was 2Lt John Dennis (C company, 2 Yorks), commanding OMLT Amber One, with an ANA Kandak platoon. Task Force Fury (US airborne), under the command of Lt Col Brain Mennes air assaulted, from Chinooks, into the surrounding villages with US Task Force 10 on high ground above the area destroying heavy machine gun positions. At least that is what it says in one of the the battle reports I am reading on page 51 of the Yorkshire Regiment Journal of Spring 2008. There is an extensive amount of first hand detail in there that was not reported by the international media. I suppose you could get a copy of it from the regiment's headquarters in York. Richard Harvey (talk) 10:10, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

What a fiasco. This article should be removed from the front page. It is obviously NOT UP TO SNUFF. --156.34.68.184 (talk) 06:24, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Indeed, there was a good deal of gratuitous tagging and damage to the article, so I've reverted quite a ways back. My apologies if I missed any good edits, but there was no other way to restore the article. The editor who did the damage appears to be of the notion that every sentence must be cited, and added other unnecessary tags. Starting over: please read WP:OWN#Featured articles and discuss significant edits on talk before defacing an article on the mainpage. Obviously, that doesn't include minor cleanup. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 11:02, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

With a few more minutes, I'll also review the featured version versus what's up now; if I find there was other damage before mainpage day, I may need to revert further back, so please hold off on any cleanup until I have a few minutes to review vs. the featured version. Marskell did not write bad articles. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 11:05, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Checked, satisfied that I reverted to the best version I could, will next see what productive edits I can recover. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 11:08, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Allright, done for now, that's the best I can do. Before IP does such extensive and unnecessary tagging of an article on the mainpage, please discuss changes and issues on talk. Thanks, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 11:12, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comparing the last version Marskell edited to the version on the page now (which was the version just before the IP started editing) shows the featured version mostly intact still, with some citation formatting changes and a few minor additions, so there does not appear to have been an issue of deterioration here since Marskell last edited. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 11:17, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

So I come back, and for the hard work I do, I get it undone? Im not "owning" the article, I am pointing out problems and fixing them! Goodness! Were any of the edits wrong? It seems that had this not been an FA, my efforts would have been appreciated, not derided. 86.26.60.18 (talk) 11:56, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]