Talk:Grand Moff Tarkin
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Copyvio
So let me get this straight, this was copied from another site, it says so at the bottom and nobody ever said anything.
- For those coming in late, the copyvio was from Star Wars Homepage (Grand Moff Tarkin) and has been up for about a month and a half. --rbrwrˆ 22:06, 31 Jul 2004 (UTC)
- Can you clarify the situation? My understanding was that the Star Wars Homepage gave permission for this to be copied over to Wilk. Much as the same procedure as Commodore (rank) was from the Naval Historical Society. --User:Husnock 31 Jul 04
- Now that I didn't know. I have no history of editing Star Wars articles on Wikipedia, and just happened to notice the anon comment above on Recent Changes, so I don't have any specialist knowledge of copyrights in this area.
- The use is clearly not permissable under the standard copyright on starwars.com, which states "Any use of any of the materials on this Site other than for private, non-commercial viewing purposes is strictly prohibited." If special permission was granted, that should be recorded somewhere and the specific terms should be made clear. Have they licensed this article under the GFDL so that we can edit it as we please and allow downstream users to make commercial use of it? If not, we probably shouldn't be using it. Are there any other articles licensed in this way, or is Grand Moff Tarkin the only one? I've had a quick look and can't see any that match the starwars.com articles. Who at Lucasfilm gave the permission? Do we have it in writing, as an e-mail perhaps?
Self-contradiction
The article is self-contradictory...the picture describes him as "loyal" who "carries out Palpatine's will", but then implies him a plot to gain power? Isn't that not loyal and more of cunning? Or was he loyal, but Palpatine was paranoid as usual and decided to purge him? Ie. sort of like Stalin using Yezhov to head the NKVD to do the dirty work then pure him afterwards? (But I'm more of thinking Vader was the loyal one, and perhaps Tarkin the dangerous one?) I don't follow Star Wars much, so I do not know. --Natalinasmpf 00:30, 16 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- A defining feature of the Sith (and by extension, the Empire), is that they are very loyal... up until the moment they plunge the dagger in their superior's back. --maru (talk) contribs 19:05, 17 February 2006 (UTC)
Tarkin shows no signs of being anything but loyal to the Empire on-film; even Vader seems at ralative ease around him. It is the (often criticized) EU who hints that he might have been considering a power play. The EU is canon unless directly contridicted by higher canon, such as the movies or what Lucas himself decides.
Move
The move to "General Tarkin" is erroneous and stupid. I'm contacting an admin to fix it. — Phil Welch 19:27, 19 July 2005 (UTC)
- Or we could just revert it and turn General Tarkin into a redirect.
- I wasn't really thinking straight for that period of time. But Governor Tarkin would be an appropriate move. --A Link to the Past 01:39, July 20, 2005 (UTC)
- I thought we generally left articles at the most common name or their highest rank? Lord know Grand Moff Tarkin is a lot more common than Governor Tarkin... --maru (talk) contribs 19:05, 17 February 2006 (UTC)
Canonicity
The source for all this exposition is... what? Novelizations? Are those considered canonical in the SW world? I suspect some characterization is in order...
--Baylink 23:03, 19 July 2005 (UTC)
- Check the article on Star Wars canon, or Star Wars Gamer Magazine #6 (October/November 2001), page 113 where it cites Sue Rostoni, an editor with Lucas Licensing
- "Our goal is to present a continuous and unified history of the Star Wars galaxy, insofar as that history does not conflict with, or undermine the meaning of Mr. Lucas's Star Wars saga of films and screenplays. Things that Lucas Licensing does not consider official parts of Star Wars history show an Infinities logo or are contained in Star Wars Tales. Everything else is considered canon.".
- The Star Wars tradition is that everything is canon unless it's explicitly non-canonical (like some stories and comic books clearly marked as such) or been specifically disowned from the Canon (extremely rare, but some late 1970's comic strips run in newspapers are totally irreconcilable with the rest of Canon). If anything conflicts, there is a specific hierarchy to specify what is correct. First is the movies themselves and statements directly from George Lucas, then there are adaptations of movies like the novelizations and radio plays, then there is the vast bulk of Star Wars Expanded Universe material like novels and comic books. Then some secondary source material (which are generally accepted as long as they don't conflict).
- Thus, if an official product gives the backstory and exposition of a character, and it isn't contradicted by anything higher up in the Canon chain, it's canon. Some parts of the Prequels, like the planet Coruscant, came first from the novels, and Lucas took them from the novels to use in the movie. Lucas has also vetoed some plot developments and revelations in novels because he disagreed with them, so everything does get a very extensive official review to ensure it fits within the canon. Some hardcore fans only acknowledge the movies themselves as Canon, but even Lucasfilm disagrees with that. Some casual fans also may make the mistake if they first came from Star Trek, which holds that only the TV shows and movies are canon, and never any novels or licensed materials. --Wingsandsword 04:36, 12 August 2005 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tarkin removed from Wikipedia:Good articles
Grand Moff Tarkin (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views) was formerly listed as a good article, but was removed from the listing because of lack of references. There are no references other than a single embedded HTML link that does not mention the subject of the article. --Allen3 talk 01:57, 17 February 2006 (UTC)
- Excellent point, sorry for not noticing. Ill find some for it in a little bit. --American Patriot 1776 14:21, 17 February 2006 (UTC)
- No no, leave it to me. I would have done it already, but I was busy with Rule of two. --maru (talk) contribs 19:01, 17 February 2006 (UTC)
- Thank you, I however will also search for references as this article is very well written and should be placed on the Good Articles list once it has some! American Patriot 1776 20:28, 17 February 2006 (UTC) Theres some links to start with. I also included the movies because they are critical in looking at who Tarkin is. American Patriot 1776 20:54, 17 February 2006 (UTC)
- I think its good now! American Patriot 1776 04:52, 26 February 2006 (UTC)
- i dont. wikilinks are not referenced, the order is all messed up (why is revenge of the sith more important than star wars?), and most importantly the article "should not omit any major facets of the topic" - i.e. why this char is important, what was goerge lucas' intentions in creating this character, what was his impact outside of the star wars universe etc? as it stands its just starwarscruft. delisted.
- ROTS comes before ANH because that is in chronological order. --maru (talk) contribs 03:22, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
- Yes and what exactly is this supposed to mean "should not omit any major facets of the topic" and does the article have to be relevent to anything but the subject its on? Just because it has no bearing on our daily life doesn't make it any more or any less well written than another article. American Patriot 1776 01:41, 7 March 2006 (UTC)
- This article is shocking - how could it ever have been nom'd as a "good article"? It is not canon, and its accounts are highly subjective/interpretive -- the description of Tarkin & Vader's association is unclear and inaccurate (although, at least it refers to something all SW fans are familiar with). The author seems to be primarily concerned with downplaying Vader's (bureaucratic, not existential) inferiority to Tarkin.
Maybe one day I'll fix it... This article sounds remarkably like someone's private use of SW characters for RPG purposes - perhaps a link to fan uses and interpretations of SW could be added.
Confusing
I find this article confusing because it seems to list a whole pile of incident's in the character's life without saying what works they occurred in. Incidents from the movies seem to be mixed up with incidents from later novels. It would be much better if we could sort out what occurred in the moves from what occurred in other novels. DJ Clayworth 16:00, 12 June 2006 (UTC)
- Its called "in-universe perspective" and its an Wikipedia no-no for just that reason WP:WAF. This article seems to be monument to how not to write an article. Odd that it ever was considered a "good article". Halfblue 04:11, 18 October 2006 (UTC)
Wilhuff
Sorry, but I think it's odd to include this EU information at the head of the article and in the infobox for a character as well known as Grand Moff Tarkin. The vast majority of the public would be unaware of this information, making the article confusing rather than informative. There's nothing wrong with mentioning EU notions such as this name, but as it has not appeared in the films, it should be restricted to the body of the article.Rhindle The Red 01:26, 21 June 2006 (UTC)
- Agreed; I changed it to Grand Moff Tarkin, since that name is good enough for the article title. Tempshill (talk) 07:27, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Poorly titled sections "Revenge of the Sith" and "A New Hope."
These sections are poorly titled. Naming the sections after works in the Star Wars saga creates the impression that the contents of the sections refer to events in the eponymous works. This is not the case.
Because the two sections, taken together, describe the arc of Tarkin's career, I recommend that they be merged into one section called something like "Overview of Tarkin's career."
I'll do it myself if I can figure out how. Capedia 20:34, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
- I figured it out. It wasn't difficult. Capedia
Tarkin's action figure
Is this figure the only one Grand Moff Tarkin action figure ever created? --David Pro 16:19, 1 May 2007 (UTC)
Death Star the novel
Tarkin has, understandable, a noteable (IMHO) role in the novel 'Death Star'. Lots42 (talk) 23:03, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
Clone Wars
Tarkin is apparently a good guy in the Clone Wars tv series. Is he really a good guy, and he switches to the dark side later line Anakin did, or is he secretly already on the dark side like Palpatine is?
Redirect
This is mostly in-universe plot summary, with no citations to third-party sources to establish notability. I am redirecting this to List of Star Wars characters. Please feel free to add there any sort of that real-world/development stuff, but only if cited to sources. --EEMIV (talk) 14:44, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- So... User:Gamaliel undid the redirect. Anyone going to offer up a reason why any of the cruft in this article should be preserved? The cited material added by User:Uncle G I'm happy to migrate to the List of, but none of those items asserts any independent notability for the subject. --EEMIV (talk) 18:49, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
- I think Uncle G's work is more than enough to have this article stand on its own. Gamaliel (talk) 19:18, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, there's more information here than can be gracefully incorporated into the list. I think the article can stand on its own now. Kudos to Uncle G. Zagalejo^^^ 02:57, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
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