Talk:Charles Barry

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A couple of issues:

• There are various grammatical issues throughout this article, particularly run-on sentences.
• I would suggest (from what I've looked at so far) that the level of detail describing Barry's Grand Tour is neither necessary nor useful. Smiles Aloud (talk) 11:34, 12 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]