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This peer review discussion has been closed.
Just did a split on the article. Really need advice on clean up.

Thanks, Serialjoepsycho (talk) 20:37, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Cas Liber

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  • Too many sentences star with "On date x,..." -see my tweaks
  • I am not familiar with it and have no idea what it is at first read - it needs a description section of what it is before launching into the timeline.
  • Is there any review/feedback/criticism that can be added? Any models/upgrades that worked better or worse than expected?

Good luck...Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:41, 3 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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